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DEPARTURE
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Copyright: Teresat Teresat (Teresat) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1399 W: 57 N: 2184] (8765)
Genre: People
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2007-10-06
Categories: Mood
Camera: Panasonic FZ18
Exposure: f/2.8, 1/15 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Theme(s): EXCITEMENT, Even more Dingo favourites..., TEXAS EXCELLENCE AWARD II, mine favorites [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2008-07-15 4:08
Viewed: 1597
Favorites: 11 [view]
Points: 176
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
There are situations full of emotions and we feel them as a confused and difuse mood.

".................
lejos muy lejos de mi vida.

Se me olvido que ya no estas.
Que ya ni me recordaras,
y me volvio a sangrar la herida

se me olvido que te olvide.
Como nunca te encontre
entre las sombras escondidas.

Y la verdad no se porque
se me olvido te olvide,
a mi que nada se me olvida."

BEBO AND CIGALA "lágrimas negras"

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To g_panakia: Thank you dear GeorgiaTeresat 1 11-26 14:00
To Soundsangels: He you thereTeresat 1 08-27 19:06
To ciore: Thank youTeresat 1 06-02 13:12
To marcocig: I read your intro before to say thanks...Teresat 3 07-26 03:53
To bazsa: ThanksTeresat 1 07-23 17:23
To Dingo: OláTeresat 1 07-23 17:21
To gnada: Thank youTeresat 1 07-22 10:30
To subs: ThanksTeresat 1 07-22 10:29
To rasto1893: thanksTeresat 1 07-21 06:18
To tatara: ThanksTeresat 1 07-21 06:16
To ARGI: Bom dia ArgyrisTeresat 1 07-21 06:12
To roald: Boa noite RoTeresat 2 07-20 03:03
To spacebar: olá antonellaTeresat 2 07-17 09:34
To Romeu: ThanksTeresat 1 07-17 06:08
To szatanowska: OláTeresat 1 07-17 06:05
To Janone: Thank youTeresat 1 07-17 06:02
To black_dream: Olá dianaTeresat 1 07-17 05:59
To amcolli: Boa noite AnnaTeresat 2 07-17 01:36
To Urfaust: From Lisbon to OsloTeresat 1 07-16 15:00
To burak28: ObrigadaTeresat 1 07-16 14:59
To joopschotsman: ObrigadaTeresat 1 07-16 14:57
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To gunershot: Many thanksTeresat 1 07-16 14:52
To Silvio2006: obrigadaTeresat 1 07-16 14:51
To cobra112: Boa noiteTeresat 1 07-16 14:48
To jazmin: ThanksTeresat 1 07-16 14:47
To Enzo63: obrigadaTeresat 1 07-16 14:46
To aes_thor: thanksTeresat 1 07-16 14:39
To mariajosecon: Boa noiteTeresat 1 07-15 18:49
To josediogo1958: Eu seiTeresat 1 07-15 18:10
To harpya: Obrigada SergioTeresat 1 07-15 18:07
To mikolaj_cava: Boa noite MikolajTeresat 1 07-15 18:05
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To japiey: jean PaulTeresat 1 07-15 17:40
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To lele: Boa noite DanieleTeresat 1 07-15 17:38
To rewshearer: Boa noite RewTeresat 1 07-15 17:33
To Monceflibra: Bebe and cigala sings inspanish this songTeresat 1 07-15 06:33
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Hello, Teresa,
The lady must be with misty eyes. Her lover has gone...
Nice and emotional due to the processing.
TFS
Valerka:)

Hello Teresat
this is a very bold experiment
black and white abstract and differenet tretment.
i like the idea.
nice imagination and concept.
good work

regards
Manuj Mehta

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  • mbrito Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1644 W: 118 N: 2834] (11418)
  • [2008-07-15 4:28]

Hello Teresat Teresat,
Another wonderful ilustration of feelings and sensations.
The difuse focus improves the «lost» sensation that comes with a «departure» of those we care.
Superb compo and an excelent b/w work fool of mood and very intense. Great note too.
Congrats, mb

Hi Teresat,

Very emotional and nice done shot. Artistic look at simple things with great effect... well done

cheers
Adrian

beautiful diffuse focus and effect for this shot
great mod and scene
perfect black and white
ciao
Lucio

Dear Teresat,
Although i don't speak Portugese, I liked the note!
The picture is so nice and so charming. Well composed with great details
Travel is always a experiment. I always hate the minutes that come after the farewell, when you find yourself alone in a place that seemed five minutes ago a friendly place. After the farewell, you start fearing the place and people!
That's departure!
Take care

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  • pozaru Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3579 W: 737 N: 2415] (19132)
  • [2008-07-15 6:05]
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Wonderful; full of emotions !


thanks,
v

Hello T
Strong post and note.
Wonderful B&W,with stunning effect.Congrats my dear!
Keep on surprising us.
Most friendly greetings
JD

Ola Teresat

Bonito visual
ela me lembra uma foto dos anos 30 ou 40.
Como se quase sem recursos em fotografia.
Um tiro de lance bem expontaneo e de uma
bonita textura.
Bonito visual e uma boa compo!
Parabens!

Sergio

Ola Teresat! Fantastic portrait. Dynamic scene. Good capture. Original picture, very original. Boa viagem!

Hello Teresat,
very artistic, black and white fits perfect into this shot.
Nice looking lady as well.
Regards Caesar

Hello Teresa,
A very lovely engaging b&w portrait. The graininess adds to the charm, she has an infectious smile and looks like the actress Mary Steenberger (sp?), and her scarf beautifully and partially hides here face. Best regards, Danilo

Hi Teresa,
At list I find something interesting! I love very much this troubled portrait the blur over the scarf, the very grainy texture, the eye, every small details are fascinating. Congratulations.

Steph.

WHOA! Im not sure what you did here but this is outstanding. This belongs on a wall somewhere. This is quite amazing...im specchless. The emotion and the feeling of movement.

Terrific.

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  • milas Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2743 W: 412 N: 2987] (32971)
  • [2008-07-15 12:06]
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Wonderful
nice imagination and concept

Hi Teresa,

A glimpse at the world she had in heart..
Before the fade off, the bold salute to the dear memories.
An emotional capture, a bold one.

Namasthe, dear friend.

jp

Hi Teresat..this is different and creative...nice use of the black and white tones..interesting composition...congratulations.

Roger

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  • lele Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 814 W: 51 N: 1717] (11169)
  • [2008-07-15 14:41]
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ciao teresa...un altro stupefacente lavoro in bianco e nero...complimenti...soggetto affascinante e particolare...complimenti
lele

Something about this shot works - I think it's the fact that your subject's eye is visible despite the flying scarf and hair; the viewer is drawn directly to that.

Rew

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  • pikas Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 158 W: 9 N: 281] (1100)
  • [2008-07-15 18:29]

Composição excelente com muita criatividade.

Muitos Parabéns, a fotografia está genial!!!

Teresa: Una bella imagen bien captada y llena de melancolía. La mascada es ele elemnto a mi jicio, más valioso en esta foto porque en parte enconde la cara de la mujer, con tan buena fortuna que nos permite atisbar su mirada. L mascada es lo que da la sensación de despedida de separación..
Un abrazo y mis felicitaciones. Si pudiera, te daría 20 puntos
María José

Hi my dear friend.
Excellent portrait!Nice B&W shot.
Regards.
A.

dear T , i really like the new themes.
you fully captured trhe dismay of a departure , but there is a glimpse in those eyes which is quite amusing, there is a shadow of a smile , a glitter of hope, as if she were in fact plannig a renewed encounter with the loved one or perhaps see a new beginnig lurking on the horizon ....
but then maybe she is standing on the prow of a boat taking her to her new life, a new love, a new future full of dreams and novelties and hope... after all who are we to say that an end must necessarily be a disaster??? most of them are in fact heralds to new beginnigs,like every sunset heralds the next sunrise.
it all depends on how you look at it
ps the force has arrived....

excellent post my friend.. mood is at the best level.. great the choise of b&w and saturation.. great realise!! wonderful note too!!
greetings from Oslo (Norway) ;))
ciao Marco

Wonderful job my friend
Great idea
Amazing capture
Congratulations
Adios
Burak28

Great job, Teresat !!
Good capture and a superb presentation and after processing.
Very good choice to present it in b/w.
greetings,
Joop!

Hi Teresat,
There is something really strong in this photo that I couldn't really describe. Its mysterious, perhaps an uncertain emotion. Your presentation is giving me a big confusion, and the confusion itself is the core of this photo. Truly an artistic work, full of emotions, loads with confusion and diffusion of mood.

Regards,
Ramdan.

Hi Teresat,

Interesting image . .
Unique but lovely presented . .

Tfs,
Tjutjut

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  • azaf1 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 740 W: 61 N: 1255] (6932)
  • [2008-07-16 5:35]

Good morning Teresat
A greatly sensitive composition with strong emotions and a different, yet intersting perspective to perceiving reality. How difficult but how very successful in capturing this state of mind in an optical way
Compliments, my dear friend
Argiris

These are true artistic statements Teresat.
These shots are your vision, which is highly skillful,
and gifted at design and asthtetics as well.
Love the scarf here, flying in the wind.
Bravo!
- Vincent

merhaba dear teresat
wonderful black white composition and interesting portrait picture.well done.
best regards.
gürkan akçakır.

Hi Teresat,
Beautiful composition....
excellent details,
Good job. Tfs.
Dr.Seyfettin Güner

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  • trekks Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2027 W: 147 N: 3408] (13641)
  • [2008-07-16 10:10]

hi Teresat

Very mysterious mood.
Uncertainty.
Unknown.
Mixed emotion. tfs

bill

Hello Teresat,
Mysterious look...full of emotion.
Impressive shot.
TFS
Selahattin E

Hi Teresat, fascinating grainy portrait, fantastic b&W shoot full of mystery, very well done, ciao Silvio

Mamma mia, Teresa! Che spettacolo. Una favola di foto, misteriosa, irreale, sfuggente. Un capolavoro.

Roberto

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  • roald Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 62 W: 64 N: 59] (709)
  • [2008-07-16 11:51]
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ola teresat.

amazing! this shot sure captures the interest of the people. very good PP works. very unorthodox composition. i like the soft tone effect on this one.

roald

Hi Teresa!

Interesting and special shot. Very effective!

jazmin

Ciao Teresat
Fascinating capture
great atmosphere and veiled sadness
an very great B&W
My congratulation
Bye
Vincenzo

Hello Teresat
Excellent action composition and B&W experimental
work.Beautiful details.TFS
Greetings
H.Ayhan
:)

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  • zms Gold Star Critiquer [C: 268 W: 0 N: 0] (0)
  • [2008-07-16 15:10]

Dear Teresa
I have to say is one of my favorite photos.
Simply Beautiful.
Outstanding in every step.
Wonderful capture.

Greetings
Rosa

Hi Teresa!
I'm sorry, I missed this one!
Really astonishing, I am still thinking if you are better in taking architectural or people pictures...!
Anyway, you are able to communicate a mood, an atmosphere, and this is not easy to do...
TFS
Ciao, Antonella

Hi dear friend,
waw! very original and full of emotions.
I don't know how you did it, but looks special.
Best wishes,
Ioana

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  • Romeu Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 332 W: 0 N: 222] (1851)
  • [2008-07-17 4:43]
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Olá Teresa,

Esta imagem é de profissional! Grande estilo.

Gosto muito de ti...

Romeu

Hi Teresat!!

Great moody shot..beautiful B&W portrait!

Amazing atmosphere and very nice grain..looks like really old photo..
TFS

Best wishes from Italy!!

Ciao!!!

AniA

Hello dear friend Teresat.
Great looking artistic outdoor portrait picture you show us here.

Good job on it.
Tfs.
Best wishes from Jan

Ola Teresat!
This shot has a great deal of emotional charge to it, the portrait, partly covered by the light scarf blown by the wind like soft petals of regret, like a sad breeze, like a waved goodbye but never spoken...There's always a void left when parting from people...Nothing else, really, does fill it...
Diana
p.s. Tomorrow.

Hey Teresat,

what a wonderful capture! very beautiful portrait, you've created a great mood. All in all, congratulations:)

TFS

Marina

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  • starky Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 329 W: 2 N: 43] (2965)
  • [2008-07-17 12:13]

Hi Teresat.Nice shot and nice moment.Good B&W picture.
Best regards, Bosko.

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  • jan515 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2498 W: 56 N: 3862] (17484)
  • [2008-07-17 13:44]

Excellent portrait Teresat,a wonderful effect of the picture.
What a amanzing moment.
Superb.
My compliment.
Janusz

Hi Teresat,
I like the way you conveyed your theme ... the composition portrayed the confused mood well as symbolized by the blurness and digital noise. Well captured and presented. Tfs and have a nice weekend.
Cheers,
Renier

Hello Teresat,
I like this melancholy shot.
Good composition and excellent B/N with a touch of past...
Compliments.

Silvia

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  • Dot Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1444 W: 31 N: 3112] (12652)
  • [2008-07-20 5:53]

HI Teresat
The flying scarf hiding the eyes, the enigmatic smile,the hair blowing in the wind, a perfect realization of the traveller.
Well done shot
Dot

Hello Teresat,
A beautiful artistic photo, really super idea and very nice effect, nice presented ... very nice, it´s like a runing in time...:o)
My best regards

Congratulation my Teresa
fantastic emotional image and great workshop
regards
Jozef..

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  • ARGI Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 99 W: 2 N: 40] (1139)
  • [2008-07-21 2:23]
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Fantastic picture Teresa !!!!!
your composition and poem are comined perfect (I had to translate the poem !).
Motion and emotions that created to my soul are very strong and sensitive the same time.
A real beautiful shot
My complements
Y
A

That's one of the best shot I've seen here on TL. Best treatment, compo and the blur too.

TFS

Marco

Ola' Teresat
I like your PP here. Really seems like an old pix. Excellent work my friend.
Dennis

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  • subs Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 252 W: 0 N: 222] (2080)
  • [2008-07-22 6:34]
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Hi Teresat,
A wonderful experiment both imaginatice and creative. A marvelous piece of work.
Regards,
Subashini

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  • gnada Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2660 W: 74 N: 4764] (21699)
  • [2008-07-22 7:42]
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Hi dear Teresat...
Very impressive B&W capture, nice pose...
Well dan...
Regd. George

Hi Teresa,
Beautiful picture in black & white, excellent POV. and composition , nice contrast and situation, good presentation and very well done.
Compliments.
Michel

Hi Teresa,
wonderful picture.
full of motion
Karl

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  • bazsa Gold Star Critiquer [C: 90 W: 0 N: 3] (2926)
  • [2008-07-23 12:21]
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Hi Teresat,
Wonderful photo, very impressive. Congratulations.
Best Regards. -bazsa

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  • Dingo Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2743 W: 370 N: 2624] (11948)
  • [2008-07-23 13:40]
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I can think of only one nit-pick here, Teresa, and that's the somewhat centered appearance of the subject - I'd like to see her more on the left, giving her more space to look into.
Apart from that, it's a very strong picture. The motion blur of the scarf (nice idea, the long shutter speed), the b&w, the grain in the image, all works wonders here.
Deserves all the smileys it got so far, many more will follow, I'm sure.
TFS

Hi Teresat
like a scene from Fellini's movie.
a very dramatic and emotional pose.
fantastic and artistic presentation.
compliments
tsilla

Wow, Tersat, what a change in your gallery! This most nostaligic image is so appealing, the mood is conveyed wonderfully. The selection of tones somewhere between black & white and sepia, the graininess, the movement, the hair, the scarf in the wind, and ,finally, her eye and lips partially showing - all this adds up to make this image so attractive. Thank you for sharing this impression with us! - Cordelia :))

Excellent Teresat! A lovely graininess to the image, well cropped and I love the swirl of the scarf. TFS,
David

Hi Teresat,
Very beautiful B&W picture..Well compo.TFS.
Reagrds.

hAyAti

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  • jone Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor [C: 2281 W: 180 N: 0] (29368)
  • [2008-07-26 2:45]

Hola TeresaT dear friend ;)))
Original and artistic photo...
Best wishes,
J ;)

Hi Teresat!
Fantastic picture. Wonderful scene. Amazing shot.
Cheers!

Hello Teresat,

Wow! Just wonderful. I love everything about this shot - the object, technique, tones, and grainy texture...
Impressive:)
Best,
Iza

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  • EOSF1 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1571 W: 126 N: 2228] (20439)
  • [2008-07-29 9:10]

Hello Teresat, fantastic shot, great B&W image and a very emotional feel to it, well done, thanks!

Mario

WOW! You hit a homerun with this one Teresat! Superb action with the scarf, LOVE the grainyness to this pic. This is haunting and almost disturbing! LOTS of emotion here! I'm quite impressed with this!
B-)
Linda

This is wonderful image. You have capture the emotion so very well here Teresat. The added noise to the image hides perfectly unnecessary detail and lets the imagination work. Wonderful work.

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  • ating76 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 81 W: 0 N: 228] (841)
  • [2008-08-04 0:20]

Hi Teresat,

This to me is a very dynamic portraiture shot. Very good impact on the photo especially the partial expression with the full on motion blur of the scarf. The noise in the picture some adds to the aesthetic qualityof the photo in my opinion.

TFS.

Regards,
Alvin

Wow.

Just wow.

Fantastic shot!!

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  • aperis Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 85 W: 5 N: 30] (1075)
  • [2008-08-17 12:49]

Hi Teresat,
Full of emotions and feelings.
Congratulations

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  • degani Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 176 W: 0 N: 262] (2624)
  • [2008-09-01 14:13]

the sense of moovement and the black and white create a beautiful atmosphere in this beautiful picture, brava Teresa
kind regards
franco

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  • chrisJ Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 4259 W: 414 N: 6797] (42610)
  • [2008-09-26 0:36]

Ola Teresat

The motion blur of the scarf, & grain, gives this image a wonderful abstract quality. The slightly yellow sepia tone invokes an archival air. Parabens & obrigado!

Wonderful mood created through this picture - reminds me of some of the reportage shots of Marilyn Monroe. Nothing else I can add which others haven't already said - bravo!
Thanks for sharing
Mark

A very intense, I love the texture very pronounced in this picture and the effect of movement with the scarf.

It's a beautiful image,
Thx.

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  • cycle Gold Star Critiquer [C: 228 W: 0 N: 3] (1851)
  • [2009-02-15 2:14]

a woman's scarf mixed effect on the sky was.
I like it

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  • ramon Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 281 W: 29 N: 720] (3457)
  • [2009-03-07 7:04]

Hi Teresat,

A very creative portrait, full of
expressions and emotion. I like the grainy
effect of the image. Excellent composition.

Cheers,
Ramon

beautiful picture
I like the way she looks..
BG

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  • ciore Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 783 W: 3 N: 108] (2309)
  • [2009-06-02 12:55]
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This is poetry, Teresat, poetry. A bridge to the human feelings

Olá Teresa,
É tão bonita e alusiva esta foto que marquei como "useful" o texto e deixei passar o tempo para lhe dizer que a considero uma de suas melhores fotos. Tudo nela é bonito e foi bem pensado, até o granulado das fotos antigas.
Rendo-lhe todas as homenagens,
Raimundo

Hi dear Teresat
Just I can say, It is a real painting, a masterpeice.
The heavily noise cover the image beautifuly
BRAVO
Best wishes, Alireza

Excelente imagen, guau, super bien lograda, la baja velocidad, el alto grano, la perspectiva, el fondo, le da un sentimiento de lejania en el tiempo fabuloso. Muchas felicidades :)

Hi You...!!!
Each one has his colors....and "yours colors" are so beautiful......unique and different....
Thanks to cross my line of life.....
Claude

Hello Teresat,
When a photo gives the viewer the feeling of getting in touch with the soul of the person it represents, it has to be a VERY powerful photo.
In other words: a VERY powerful photo! ;o)
The idea, the grainy treatment, the composition and the mood: everything fits...
TFS & kind regards,
Erik

Beautifull mystic photo Teresat..
well done..
very good title too

just lovely
great compo
i add it to my fav. list

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