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Copyright: Bernarda Ber (Ber) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 298 W: 67 N: 67] (4660)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2008-06-23
Categories: Nature
Exposure: f/4, 1/400 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2008-07-15 4:56
Viewed: 332
Points: 20
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flower
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Czesc Bernarda! Jak zwykle, staranna praca. Interesujaca kompozycja, bardzo ciekawe kadr, lany swiatlocien. Dobra ostrosc. Klaniam sie!

Hello Ber,
A different look to nature.
Well contrasting green and rusty metal plate.
I liked shadow of plant also
TFS
Selahattin E

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  • Tomek Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1312 W: 47 N: 2919] (16786)
  • [2008-07-15 10:43]

Witaj Ber:)
Serdecznie gratuluje setnej foty na TL!!!
Ciekawe spojrzenie - zawsze zwracamy uwage na kwiaty, a lodygi omijamy wzrokiem. Dzieki takiej subiektywnej kompozycji mozna skupic uwage na interesyjacych szczegolach, a wlasnie kompozycyjnie to zdjecie jest super, rowniez gra swiatla robi tu duzo dobrego, jezeli chodzi o kadrowanie... chyba wywalilbym lewa ciemna przestrzen... z drugiej strony tworzy ona porzadany kontrast... hmmmm ciekawe zaczynam gadac jak Lesiu " nie chcem ale muszem " hahahah
Ogolnie praca jest fajowska i basta.
T. :):):):):

Bernarda Hi:
Very interesting nature presentation. Wonderful color contrast and shadows.
Congratulations, well done.
Remember a note is always interesting an shows people your interest in your composition.
Larry
USA-tfs

Siema Ber!
Fajowskie foto w Twoim, calkowicie w Twoim stylu.
3maj sie!

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  • emka Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 118 W: 0 N: 66] (1141)
  • [2008-07-15 23:24]
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Witaj, ciekawa kompozycja. W tle chyba jakaś rdza, atrakcyjnie wygląda i do tego kwiat, a właściwie tylko łodyga i jej cień. Świetne liście. Czy to też rudbekia? Fajnie to wyszło. Pozdrawiam

Małgorzata

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  • mbrito Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1631 W: 118 N: 2816] (11348)
  • [2008-07-16 5:15]

Hello Bernarda,
Excelent compo and amazing colours. The strong shadow against the red b/g is superb.
Stil a very original look and a great mood.
Congrats, mb

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  • trekks Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2025 W: 144 N: 3404] (13633)
  • [2008-07-16 10:09]

hi Bernarda

Very interesting abstract shot of macro for this flower. So many ways to capture macro. tfs

bill

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  • AKITA Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1032 W: 81 N: 66] (12430)
  • [2008-07-17 0:17]

dear Bernarda Ber,
your beautiful feeling is between the light and the shadow, or in the contrast between the live and the death. and your point of the view hides behind the shadow, then your view in mind is actually beyond the light source...your desire looks imagining to rise above the presence in the time. it is of course vanity, but you seem to be able ro relize it in your image space, a moment.
thank you,
Akihisa

Tu jeszcze lepiej - kwiat i rdza. Wszystko kiedyś zeżre?
Pozdr.

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