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Darlene


Darlene
Photo Information
Copyright: mao ronan (maoronan) (51)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2008-07-12
Categories: Artwork, Experimental, Portrait
Exposure: f/14.0, 1/125 seconds
Details: (Fill) Flash: Yes
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2008-07-23 17:19
Viewed: 298
Points: 16
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Another shot taken from a lights class that I joined. This was using 2 soft lights.

I adjusted the level and contrast. I also sharpened and cropped a bit.
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Hi Mao,

Well captured with this position . . I prefer to put the model a bit stay away from the wall, so may not have the shadow . .
But I like the exposure setup with all details are presented . . natural skin color . .
Great shot my friend

Tfs,
Tjutjut

Hi Mao,
Beautiful portrait,weel done.Congratulation.
Regards,
Ralf

I really like the shot but I do find the shadow on the back drop to take away from the photo a bit. Everything else is perfect. TFS

Good light, good composition, sharpness, nice sharp shot.

  • Great 
  • eisa Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 94 W: 8 N: 33] (470)
  • [2008-07-23 23:34]
  • [+]

mao

a quality shot,
good sharpness, composition & lighting...
ang ganda sir...

tfs - chris

  • Great 
  • ajh1 (5)
  • [2008-07-24 12:39]
  • [+]

Hi Mao,
Nice shot with great lighting and sharpness. A slight shame about the shadow but for a first go in the studio very nearly top marks.
Well done.
Andy.

Hi Mao,
I really like this portrait; excellent pose with a kind of tentioned look. The skin tone is perfect natural. her look is priceless. Great posting my friend.
Hans

As everyone else, the shadow on the wall bothers me a little. But overall, beautiful shot for a first time. Ganda ng model, the sharpness is great and the drama is superb. Nice work po.

Michelle

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