My Girls

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• Ctrl_Alt_Canc (460)
• [2008-07-27 7:32]

Hello Robert,
this shot is great, good B/W choice, 'your' girls are very cute.
TFS,
Flaminia

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• tsesler (6301)
• [2008-07-27 7:41]

Hi Robert,
beautiful shot of beautiful girls indeed,
they are really lovely and sweet girls,
i am the dad of one of pretty darn cute girl anyway;)
excellent b&w work here,
perfect clarity and sharpnes,
welldone and tfs,
regards,
Taner
by the way welcome to TL;)

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• lisapw1 (8370)
• [2008-07-27 7:43]
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Hi Robert,

Although I am a big fan of black and white photos, I think I would prefer to see this one in color. Just for the coloring of their dresses, hair, peaches and cream skin, rosy lips, and of course the blue flowers mixed with green. They are cute though.... all sugar and spice! :D

Lisa

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• shelbeesmom (48433)
• [2008-07-27 8:06]
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Hi Robert! Welcome to TL! I'm an old Texas gal and yes the crop was barely worth getting out for this year! I like this pic, the comp is fabulous! The processing could have been leveled a bit more. There is alot of OE on their arms and faces. That's a minor fix in the future by shooting a higher F-stop, 5.6 is too low for 1/500. Are you shooting auto or manual? IF you stick around here long enough you will learn so much. Manual is best and more flexible. I would have put the F-stop here at anywhere between 7.1 and 11. LOVE the vignetting you added! Excellent post! They are adorable! Hey, I'm in Houston!
B-)
Linda

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• Matylda76 (6690)
• [2008-07-27 9:32]

hello Robert;
excellent capture, very good b-w shot
girls look lovely;
great sharpness;
well done;
tfs;
regards Karolina

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• juyona (15483)
• [2008-07-27 9:59]

Hola amigo,
bello retrato y buen pov,
b/w mgnífico, ideal disparo.
saludos Robert

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• Beger (19988)
• [2008-07-27 10:21]

Hi Robert,
Welcome on TL!
I like the classic way you made this beautiful portrait of your girls. Excellent point of view and pose. The B&W is a good choice, here, enhancing the timeless of the mood! With an old photo treatment, this one could be a portrait of your grandmother and her sister!
The WS of Linda is well done to correct the minor overexposition. Bravo and have a great time on the site!
Annie

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• caledonia (7255)
• [2008-07-27 12:36]

Hi Robert,

Lovely children and good black and white conversion, if has a nice nostalgic look. Welcome to TL.

Douglas

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• Ivankos (1465)
• [2008-07-27 15:44]

You are happy man! God bless you!

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• Mirra78 (4912)
• [2008-07-27 20:32]

Lovely portrait taken in a very nice scenery - great lighting and nice b&w tones. Effective:)
Tfs,
Iza

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• tere8 (108)
• [2008-07-28 10:43]

Very nice portrait of your daughters... even more with the B&W tone. Great shot! Thanks for sharing.

Regards,
Tere

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• mbaqir (980)
• [2008-07-29 7:19]

Hi Robert
Again a fantastic pix.
Baqir