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in the train


in the train
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Copyright: Ernany Siregar (ernanysiregar) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor [C: 97 W: 11 N: 11] (36)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2005-05-14
Categories: Daily Life, Transportation
Exposure: f/4, 1/25 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2005-05-18 9:59
Viewed: 794
Points: 8
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
i'm on the train... and i stood like nobody's business and took some local shot.. heheh.. here's a couple that capture my attention. ehhehe.. lol! whoever they are, THANKS! YOu're On TL.COM!!!
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this is a much better photo on the MRT :)
just need a little more isolation on the subject, for me i find F/2.2 - 2.5 works well (if u hav them) for these MRT shots cause its usually quite crowded on the train with lots of disstraction around

good effort, i'm adding this to my "subway" theme :)

Hey Ernany! Hope you are not sick of me commenting on your photos. I see a very good improvement in this photo. Nice and sharp and not overexposed. A good amount of contrast too. A nice touch would be to lower the DOF (if you can with that lens) to give it a little more DOF but I like this one. Keep them coming. JP

Nice!
I don't know why, i think this is a very good photo. We can feel something. Good composition, good colours...
Thanks!

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  • mukesh Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 691 W: 102 N: 435] (4791)
  • [2005-06-07 12:58]

It is a wonderful capture Ernany for the warmth it is conveying. You can feel the chemistry between the young couple - despite the crowd being in focus and other elements intruding. One can feel a story between the two... a curiosity that cannot be really explained. Great work..

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