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Copyright: Sabesh Sabapathy (sabesh) (106)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2008-07-03
Categories: Portrait
Camera: Canon EOS 5D, Canon EF 50mm f/1.2L USM, Hoya 72mm UV
Exposure: f/10.0, 1/200 seconds
Details: (Fill) Flash: Yes
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2008-08-19 8:57
Viewed: 298
Points: 6
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Experimenting with studio lighting @ Spectrum Studios.
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Hi Sabesh nice work. Good portrait with nice lighting, nice pose by good looking model she looks sharp & black background works well.
Regards - Adil.

Nicely done, Sabesh, your lighting is excellent, good expression of the model. It's sharp and clear, good compo. I think cutting off a bit more of the bottom (leaving all of her hair) would have worked better with a slightly larger photo as well. TFS

Hi Sabesh

There's plenty to like with this shot. I think the lighting is good overall, the shot is crisp, clear, the model is beautiful.

I am always cautious about models leaning their heads backwards - it tends to "feel" natural when they are posing, but it seldom looks good. Usually the head tilted forward works better. Her right arm is also slightly awkward, we can see a glimpse of it only: it would be better to either see it clearly, or not at all.

I also think your composition could be better - move her slightly to the right, so that she is off-centred?

A nice shot overall though.

Rew

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