Slurp

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• Arusem (11)
• [2005-05-23 16:57]

Sam,

Super vivid colors... I really enjoy the saturated look in this. Nice control over the DOF as well. They almost look like twins.

Nicely done.

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• Sutavugu (5)
• [2005-05-23 16:58]

Hi Sam,
Nice shot! You captured at the correct moment.. they are physically there but mentally not.. Good concentation on drinks..
I like the composition, placing of girls into frame is very good.. Colors are vivid.. contrast is good.. Depth is great which makes the girl in near staring lead-role.. If you had focused on both, it would be something repeated.. I like depth this way..
Good shot Sam,
Congrats!
..Calayan

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• mitternacht (31)
• [2005-05-23 17:03]

Hi Sam,
Now I'm thirsty too, just saw another photo of food that made me hungry... better eat and drink soon :)

I really like your POV and DOF here. Taking this picture slightly from behind emphasizes the notion of deep thought, in this otherwise sort of trivial setting. The strong colors and the strong eye-makeup are nice graphical elements.

Simon

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• msirois (305)
• [2005-05-23 17:17]

Hi, Sam--
Nice capture. The bright colors and their blond hair add a nice glowing effect. The duplicate diagonals of the straws direct your attention across the image nicely. Well done.
Michael

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• Werewolf (26142)
• [2005-05-23 21:48]

I like it a lot. The contrast are good that's true, the symetry of actuon and look too! Even commun point in choice of the straw, have a ring in the same style almost :o)

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• yerevantsi (847)
• [2005-05-24 1:31]

:)
I like the PoV so both of them on the same angle and action, with the second blurred.
Vivid colors are super.
I like the washed-out glass edges too.
Very stylish!
You did a good job, Sam!

Garo

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• cloverstar (0)
• [2005-05-27 18:34]

Good close up with nice saturated vibrant colours. It has a fresh youthfull feel about it.Even the nail polish is blue.

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• ropetko (0)
• [2005-05-30 2:56]

Hi Sam!
Very nice shot, very artistic althougt a candid shot. I like the vivid colors and I think DOF was of the right choice, leaving the second girl blurred.
Nice captured moment which created great composition with diagonal of their faces and the straws. Good job done!
Regards

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• tucancr (3041)
• [2005-06-05 18:27]
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Hi Sam, this is a great shot, I like the angle you used to capture it, very vivid colors, TFS Iris

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• KiwiRob (550)
• [2005-06-19 20:22]

Nice image, super saturation, I really like it. The square format really suits the point of view.

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• mwebr (3402)
• [2005-07-20 15:05]
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Hi Sam,
What a great pov of these two girls enjoying their slurpies. Very nice lighting with vibrant saturated color tones. Great candid composition with good use of DOF.
I love the color tones in their hair.

Michael

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• wck (3843)
• [2005-08-09 21:47]

Artistic!!!!
Lovely Colors, Lovely Photo!

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• deryk (15)
• [2006-03-24 0:30]

Vibrant colors, good POV. I like the duality there. The two girls so natural. Very nice picture!
Deryk

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• strict-machine (90)
• [2006-04-10 16:50]

I'm enjoying your shots

this is another great work from ya!

I like the colors.

the focus is on the right point good effect that the sister is in the background

natural but different and good!