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Angela


Angela
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Copyright: John David (johnnymag) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 95 W: 18 N: 465] (2357)
Genre: People
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2008-10-04
Categories: Artwork, Portrait
Camera: Nikon D200 Digital SLR
Exposure: f/7.0, 1/60 seconds
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2008-10-06 9:29
Viewed: 384
Points: 5
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Hi,

One from a studio session with a beautiful model, Angela using a 50mm nikkor, tripod, and one light with softbox, level with the model. PP conv to mono using gradiant, increase contrast, crop and resize.

John
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  • Aida Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 275 W: 47 N: 206] (2258)
  • [2008-10-06 9:48]

Hi John,
I like the composition and the details on the eye. The pp is nice also but I think the nose turned out a bit weird.
Tfs,
Aida

Hola John.
Genial presentación, muy original.
Perfectos contrastes.
Saludos amigo, JL.

Visita mi Blog.

Hello John,

This is very well worked.
I immediately remember such phrases as positive and negative space!
The models direct eye to eye contact is very important and the reflection in her eye the crowning glory.

Kind regards,
Bev :-)

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