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Trojan


Trojan
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Copyright: geoffrey ramji (rigz) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 161 W: 0 N: 85] (1066)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2008-10-04
Categories: Portrait
Exposure: f/4.8, 1/60 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2008-10-08 2:22
Viewed: 305
Points: 25
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Trojan...one of the most popular detergen brand.I captured this stylo guy also during my festive breaking. I attemped to take his picture coz of his "Trojan" hair. I do get his permission first before I take few shots . Among of its, I only satisfied with this one.

Any comments/critiques is highly appriciated.

Regards,

Geoffrey Bin Ramji

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To atomas59: Trojanrigz 1 10-27 23:20
To wieyos: Trojanrigz 1 10-08 07:34
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Not bad, but there's something about the textures that doesn't seem right. Which lens did you use? Did you PP-ed it in some way? It looks a bit softish. @ 195mm, and 1/60, it's motion blur if you didn't have a VR lens

Hi Rigz!
Amazing hair. Very sophisticated art work.
Cheers!

hello geoffrey..
wah... this is the really trojan, the hair style is good, color of the skin is very sharp, well done...

Dear Geoffrey Ramji!
Wonderful head!
Amazing hair.
Good capture.
Original portrait.
TFS!

ini memang klasik, Bro.

kalau dia pakai subang, lepas tu ada cincin di hidung, kemudian ada lagi cucuk di bawah bibir....wah, bertambah lah garang lagi, along pun takut!

imej yang lucu!

TFS & Salam
regards
Agoes

Hello, Geoffrey!

Great job, my friend. Nice and original sharp portrait indeed!! Congratulations and TFS :o)

Abraços,
Bruno

Merhaba
Interesting hairs. But good portrait.
Well done. Thanks for sharring.

Kerem

Hai Rigz,

Sangat menarik dan elemen lucu pun ada. Kalu kasi calit warna pada muka dia ni pasti macam dalam movie "Last Of The Mohican".

Composition was good, DoF was great, can see the details clearly.

TFS

Regards

steve

Hi Jeff. Good framing of this guy with fine details of the hair. I like this side view against the negative background. Regards. Jusni

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  • milas Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2733 W: 412 N: 2987] (32833)
  • [2008-10-09 7:55]

selam dear Geoffrey...
verynice shot and portrait..superb colors and focus..selamlar

Impressive portrait here Geoffrey

It's quite strongly sharpened in places - there's ghosting down down the back of his neck and an odd-looking texture to the stubble on the side of his head, but the impact of this portrait is immense.

You did a fine job!
Rew

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  • Lano Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 57 W: 0 N: 173] (1031)
  • [2008-10-10 6:02]

Assalammualaikum Rigs,

saya susah betul mau komen potrait, bagi saya asal terang-jelas, sharp warna kulit macam original ok laitu.. dan yang konon teknikal saya baca kalau ambil potrait pakai F yang besar (F value kecil) seperti yang kau pakai inilah :)

jadi menurut citarasa sayalah capture kau ni memenuhi itu semua so hasilnya bagus dan saya suka.

Regards,

Ruslan

This is a nice portrait. I really like the angle, and the light used in this image. The contrast are well balance, and the skin tones..as the exposure are perfect. Great expression on the man's face. Real good Job.

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