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Loneliness


Loneliness
Photo Information
Copyright: Usaf Jaffari (Usaf) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 209 W: 78 N: 160] (1512)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2008-09-28
Categories: Nature
Camera: Konica Minolta Dimage A2
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2008-10-10 9:40
Viewed: 309
Points: 16
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Hate, anger, frustration,
How does one survive?
Confusion, distraught, depression.
Why even be alive?

Screaming, running, sobbing,
Everyone is swarming.
Yelling, crying, dying.
Does someone really care?

I sit alone now, all by
Myself with no one else.
They've all left again for good,
And I am once again alone.

I only have friends when
They need a place to hide.
Does that make them love me?
"My basement's always open. . ."

I sit alone again and cry,
For the friends I wish I had,
But will never see.
All I get are words, in threes.

They speak to me softly,
Worry in their faces.
Do they care? Or is
Their worry worthless?

It hurts at the end,
As we all know, but
After that we don't
Know how to go.
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To chiarettama: ThxUsaf 1 10-12 07:52
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Nicely presented and well composed.
GRACE

Hi Usaf,
this tender flower makes me think about fragilness...
Wonderful colors and composition.
Chiara

Asalaam Alaikum USAF. I like the DOf and the diagonal composition. The color and the note is good. There is a sense of loneliness but there is beauty and grace. good post. Allah Hafiz

Hi Usaf, well composed very good use of DOF sharp flower with beautiful color. Well done. Regards - Adil.

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  • juyona Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 2630 W: 1 N: 1268] (15465)
  • [2008-10-10 12:41]

Hoala amigo,
precioso trabajo,
excelente pov y color...
atractiva presentación,
saludos

Hello my dear friend,

Beautiful macro shot!
Nice colors and a very good BG.
Congratulations and TFS.
Sergio

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  • trekks Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2027 W: 147 N: 3408] (13641)
  • [2008-10-12 2:56]

h Usaf

Great macro shot of the flower in good light and DOF blur. The sharpness and color is good in this close up. Simple yet elegant shot. tfs

bill

great angle...
great colour...
n great composition...


tfs
arijit

Hi dear friend,
lovely to see such a beauty in your gallery.
Good angle of shot and framing style.
Nice note and title for it.
Have a lovely day.
Ioana

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