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A GENTLE SMILE


A GENTLE SMILE
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Copyright: Antonella Fish (spacebar) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 249 W: 0 N: 203] (1079)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2008-08-31
Categories: Portrait
Exposure: f/4.5, 1/125 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2008-10-27 14:04
Viewed: 635
Points: 48
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Another little smiling of my victim…

Anyway, I would simply underline that when people we are fond of are well, we all enjoy it.
That’s all.
Here’s my mood, tonight: Dean Martin - When you're smiling
I have to point out that my mood and my musical track are definitely on my own and they are NOT related to Flaminia’s choices… ;-)

Techno: Just resized and added saturation and a little contrast.

cunejo200, pikas, Teresat, tanburi, szatanowska, Mangoman, Urfaust, cinca, Silvio2006 has marked this note useful
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ThreadThread Starter Messages Updated
To Janone: Earring out!spacebar 2 10-28 14:40
To ayse51: Thanksspacebar 1 10-28 14:29
To Teresat: Oui, je suis Catherine Deneuvespacebar 1 10-28 14:22
To atomas59: when you're smilingspacebar 1 10-28 13:50
To jonathanhart: Thanks a lotspacebar 1 10-28 13:39
To Urfaust: Mare Adriaticospacebar 1 10-28 13:33
To CAROL50: Boucle à nezspacebar 1 10-28 13:30
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I like it!

A beautiful woman of course.

Nice use of available/natural light, good composition and a well chosen angle for her face, it really flatters the line of her jaw and cheekbones.

Nice work
Rew

Hello antonella

here is therefore a new photograph of appealing Flamina...and always comes out well.

His delightful smile idealizes the site of Treklens .

you have a victim of choice ^^

Hi Antonella
nice portrait...tfs
regards
Dogan İZLER

Hi Antonelle

Very good portrait
Compo is effective and too cliche
Model is beautifull, en photogenic
You pp worked out well, I like the colours like this !

\TFS

Jan

Allo Antonella,
Il semble s'être passé une éternité depuis ma dernière critique , je m'en excuse . Je voudrais te dire que ce portrait de ta charmante fille est bien réalisé , ta composition est excellente , je dirais que Flamina est un tout petit peu près du cadre et le choix de l'arrière-plan est très correct , contrastant bien avec la figure et surtout la chevelure de ton sujet ,Je trouve Flamina adorable ici voir mignonement espiègle et c'est ce qui m'accroche , elle fait aussi séductrice, alors voilà pourquoi j'aime tant ce regard et ce sourire! Toutefois Antonella le cadre ne me semble pas vraiment convenir , il doit y en avoir un , oui plus neutre et plus large pour bien la 'complimenter ' qu'elle soit la vedette quoi . Je n'ai jamias remarqué la petite boucle à son nez ah la jeunesse aujourd'hui ,lolol .
Du bon travail ,
Carol

solare.. e bellissima..
raccolgo un pò di linea di fortuna che strappo a qualcuno che non so.. via wirless.. qui in questa casa umidiccia di Pesaro.. per dirti che hai colto una magnifica espressione.. e lo sguardo è dolce e caldo.. e pieno di piacevoli innocui pensieri.. mi piace moltissimo!!
un saluto.. Marco

I often saw your victim, but not sure if I leave only once a critique, a beautiful model for sure, and the way you captured her expressions is well done, framings, moods, this one like the previous ones is a good portrait, good photos &... bellissima :)

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  • cinca Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 327 W: 2 N: 143] (4452)
  • [2008-10-27 15:32]

Ciao Antonella, hai colto uno sguardo che scalda il cuore per la gioia e la serenità che vi si legge. Ottimo taglio, luce e colore.
Ciao, cinzia

ciao Antonella!

cool work...i like the song very much!!!!!!
probably i prefer your choices than Flaminia’s:)
great smile nice girl!
TFS
Kiss

Ania

Hi Atonella,
I really like this image, it's a well thought,the pose is naturel, but you can feel the presence of the subject...the first quality needle to produce a convincing image. The background and the clothings are well coordinates, and done in good taste. The only think I've got some hang up would be the colour tone, to much on the magenta side, so i've posted a workshop with some colour correction. Nice work

Ciao Antonella. Bentrovata. Bellissimo ritratto. Molto nitida Flaminia, dall'espressione intensa.

Roberto

Hi Antonella...excellent pose...great colors and tones...nice composition.

Roger

Hi Antonella,
I loved eye contact,clarity, lightening and off centre composition.
My compliments..
TFS
Selahattin E

ecco Antonella rientrare in gioco
bel colpo ed ottima posa della modella
brave tutte e due
ottima scelta della cornice in tinta
Lucio

Ciao Antonella, oostante tutte l foto che le hai fatto ancora ti sorride, mai visto una modella così paziente:)
Splendida espressione e sorriso che fa invidia a quello della Monna Lisa, brava, ciao Silvio

'Lady in RED'.!
Suits her nicely, Antonella.
Only get that 'earring' out of het nose.
Regards ,
Jan

boa tarde Antonela
A energic and afirmative personnality. Full of colours and her great eyes have the bright of life. She is amazing and real:beautiful portrait!
(Ps do you remember the charm of young Deneuve')
Um abraço
Teresa

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  • ayse51 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1719 W: 124 N: 1479] (20826)
  • [2008-10-28 11:18]
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Hi Anotella,
beautiful smile.I liked her looks and the color of her hair.TFS.Necla.

Ciao Antonella,
Your daughter looks natural in this portrait. Lovely smile, well metered with superb details. One of your many best. My compliments. Danilo

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  • EOSF1 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1580 W: 128 N: 2229] (20485)
  • [2008-10-29 9:00]

Another very good portrait of your favourite model! :-) Good light, good tight crop and very good details, well done!

Mario

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  • pikas Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 158 W: 9 N: 281] (1100)
  • [2008-11-08 2:48]

Ola Antonella,

Magnific portrait, great pose, very beautiful model.

Fantastic light and colors.

Good work,

Greetings,

Mário

se qulacuno ha qualcodasa da ridire sulla mesa a fuoco degli occhi stavolta sparagli! beellissima come sempre
ciao
anna

Ciao Antonella,
A wonderful portrait vith nice pose.TFS.
Regards,

hAyAti

Very beautiful portrait of the beauty, Nice expressions.

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