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If I could live again...


If I could live again...
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Copyright: Anna Romanowska (szatanowska) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 670 W: 13 N: 485] (3001)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2008-08-22
Categories: Daily Life, Nature, Transportation, Experimental, Abstract, Nocturnal, Mood
Exposure: f/3.2, 1/25 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Theme(s): my photos, Welcome to the Back-Slapping Party [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2008-11-03 19:04
Viewed: 847
Points: 50
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
God If only I could live again..

I would never left my friends..
I would forgiven my parents and told them how much i loved them..
I would respect the men who loved me more..
I would have children and taught them things that i had to learn by myself and love them by love that nobody loved me with in my live..
I would never blamed anyone for tragedies that happend to me..
I would never regret yesterday and all of my misteakes..
I would never lost even one day..
I would be more brave and less fearful..
I would trust more in people..
I would be more tolerant and understanding..
I would never allow myself for hateress to own fatherland..
I would love and I would talk to more people ..
I would said "thank you" before it was too late..
I would took more care to the details that i never noticed before..

And maybe if i could live again i would be completely someone else that i am now ?

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Porto Di Santo Stefano in Monte Argentario at summer's twilight..just quiet water and peaceful boats..

What else can i dedicate here for you than this?

..I haven't slept for two days
I've bathed in nothing but sweat
And I've made hallways scenes for things to regret
My friends they come
And the lines they go by
Tonight I'm gonna rest my chemistry


I live my life in cocaine
Just a rage and three kinds of yes
And I've made stairways
Such scenes for things that I regret
Oh, those days in the sun
They bring a tear to my eyes
Tonight I'm gonna rest my chemistry
Tonight I'm gonna rest my chemistry

But you're so young
You're so young
Your look in my eyes
You're so young, so sweet, so suprised

So the sign says "OK"
Gotta take a ride just recline in the faraway
Got to take some time to realise
That my friends they come
And the lines they go by
Tonight I'm gonna rest my chemistry


But you're so young
You're so young
You look in my eyes
You're so young, so sweet, so suprised
You look so young
Like a daisy in my lazy eyes

So tonight I'm gonna rest my chemistry
BUT Tonight I'm gonna rest my chemistry...!!!

Interpol - my biggest geniuses that play on the strings of my feelings..

"Music is a moral law. It gives soul to the universe,
wings to the mind, flight to the imagination,
and charm and gaiety to life and to everything."

Thank You All!

Ania

Teresat, szekelykristof, tatarovisk, Silvio2006, ola_kwiatek, Alfonso, spacebar, trekks, Cat_Mouse, jan515, harpya, milas, gnada, gosiek has marked this note useful
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To socroviche: ciao Sabinaszatanowska 1 11-21 00:52
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Hello Little Polish Poet!
wonderful shot and colours
tones are perfect for your long comment
have good day and life
ciao
Lucio

Hi Ania,
Nice evening view at this pier, the blue, cold tones are awsome. There is a bit noise though, but not a serious problem. Fine composition, calm and tranquille image with nice lines in your note to accompany with. TFS.
Friendly greetings,
Kristof

Olá Ania!

Great composition. Like very much the blue effect giving us this cold feeling. Nice one ;)
Very good POV, congrats.

best wishes
kisses from Mealhada

Marco

Ciao Ania, fascinating composition with splendid light, great perspective with a lot of boats, very well done, baci Silvio

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  • AKITA Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1005 W: 81 N: 66] (12152)
  • [2008-11-04 23:07]

dear Ania (Anna?),
of course, the real world is only one of countless possible or imaginative worlds, and the photo is simple record of all illusional visions in our minds space.
in this your shot, we can see mere boats in pale blue evening and also see your quiet vibration insomnia, but in any case, someone already mixed "future and past", "hope and regret",,,so we can imagine only unrealistic real or of course realistic unreal...
Akihisa

Siema Anka!
Fajniutie miejsce. Czaderskie swiatelko. Pomyslowa foteczka.
3maj sie!

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  • tatara Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 206 W: 64 N: 401] (3779)
  • [2008-11-05 14:20]

Hi Anna
If I could live again ... and I like that I'm in your vicinity....
Great thinking and great capture
greeting
JozefK

witaj !!
No no no super te stateczki i ten klimat Boski !
az chce sie czlowiek wybrac na zagle!! pozdrawiam i zapros nas kiedys na rybki do Siebie hehe :P

Bom dia Ania
You use your own chemistry and i feel i am living inside the sea. I love it.
Thanks for the video bonus. It´s great.
have a good WE
Kisses
Teresa

Vitaju tsibe Ania!
nice...i think your job is very good,because you don't do only picture, you make presentation of your life(what you see today,what you think today,what you want today)it's fantastic!=)
Aliaksandr

Hi Anna!
Like a lot the global feelings you are able to communicate.
Every single shot you post adds something (can I exaggerate?) to my life! :-)
TFS
Ciao, Antonella

Hello Anna.
Your note is very touching. Well done.
hen I could live onesmore, I like to have one of these boats, haha
About the picture, take always care about the water level.
Second, Try to upload at 800 pixels, and with as close to 300 Kb's.
With a blue/green colour in the sky, easy to get that noise in it.
Regards, Jan.

Hi Anna
very good shot of the boats
Ciao Paolo

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  • trekks Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2016 W: 144 N: 3390] (13589)
  • [2008-11-15 12:48]
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hi Ania

Very poetic Note and well written with sensitivity.

The marina view is nicely composed to show the neat row of boats and a misty air. Perhaps for the technical aspect, the water horizon is tilted to left but can be easily fixed.

Nice cool tone.

tfs, bill

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  • kaleh Silver Star Critiquer [C: 13 W: 0 N: 9] (482)
  • [2008-11-18 4:54]

Swietnie wyszlo... delikatny blekit i szarosc ustawionych jeden obok drugiego okretow. Piekne w swej prostocie... nawet przy przechylonym horyzoncie... :)

Hi Ania
wonderful blue tones and wonderful pov in this shot
very nice composition
Where do u live?
Sabina

Bardzo ladna tonacja.
Ciekawie to wyszlo.
Bardzo fajna praca.
Pozdrawiam

Nice color tones and and lovely view,
thanks for the nice description too Anna!

Malik & Mary.

Horyzont nie jest całkiem poziomy, moim zdaniem mógłby być nawet trochę bardziej przekręcony. To prosty sposób stosowany z powodzeniem również przez rasowych reporterów, wygrywających konkursy takie jak World Press Photo. Zawsze wprowadza napięcie, niepokój - i tutaj one są, nie wiem, czy widzisz, i czy to przekręcenie kadru było zamierzone. Nawet takie niezdecydowane odejście od wypoziomowania kadru wprowadza większe napięcie, ponieważ jest w tym coś niezdecydowanego, niepewnego. ;-)

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  • Pelin Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 21 W: 5 N: 31] (483)
  • [2008-12-21 2:31]

Witaj szatanowska.Piękne portowe ujecie. Podoba mi sie szczegolnie tonacja barw. Pozdrawiam

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  • jan515 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2498 W: 56 N: 3862] (17484)
  • [2009-01-02 14:44]

Ciao Ania,
wspanialy kolor fotografi,stateczki tylko wsiadac i na ta piekna spokojna wode wyruszac.Sliczne portowe ujecie.Ma zdjecie swoja wartosc Aniu. A do tego piekny komentarz.
Z pozdrowieniami.
Janusz

Ciao Ania


Nice shot and great vision of this marina!
wonderful shot and colors
I like the filter in blue gives a beautiful
sense the atmosphere and the repetition of
boats at the pier is fantastic!
Great composition.
Greetings!

Sergio

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  • edal Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 599 W: 71 N: 645] (4306)
  • [2009-01-17 2:02]

Witaj Anna,
Good composition of diagonally peared boats...
And now I select you,
Anton

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  • milas Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2720 W: 405 N: 2973] (32715)
  • [2009-01-27 10:24]

merhaba dear Anna...
verynice shot and detail... A superb colors and comp...selamlar

"Pochyl się trzcino, aż przejdzie fala"

Cześć Aniu,

Piekna masz cala galerie a to zdjecie jest jednym z najlepszych, udalo Ci sie uwiecznic spokoj, port wyglada bezpiecznie - tak jak kazdy port powinien, do tego ten kolorek!
Pozdrawiam
Gosia

Anna,
I like the concept here but there are a few things that I'd do differently here. One, I'd give this a bit of Clockwise rotation to level out the horizon. Two, I'd probably clone out the blurry spot in the sky just right of center. Three, I also think helpful photographers notes would allow the viewers to know specific feedback that you'd like to have instead of (or in addition to) song lyrics or poems. Overall, this isn't a bad shot, it just loses my interest quickly after opening the thumbnail

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