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ONCE UPON A DECEMBER


ONCE UPON A DECEMBER
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Copyright: Antonella Fish (spacebar) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 249 W: 0 N: 203] (1079)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2008-08-31
Categories: Friends/Family, Portrait
Exposure: f/4.5, 1/125 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2008-11-10 13:20
Viewed: 775
Points: 40
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
The last of the series…

Flaminia helped me in post processing, so I cannot absolutely explain – due to the unbelievable speed she works with – every single step in photoshop. :-)
There’s a thing I’m proud of: compared to the previous shots I was able to change her lip color in P/P so that it fits better with hair and scarf.

This musical link Anastasia - ONCE UPON A DECEMBER is one of the carton movie songs she used to sing when she was a child, Italian version, of course!

Hope you like!

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Hi Antonella,
I hope I'm first for critique your great portrait.
Perfect cropping and stunning color. I liked dance of light
TFS
Selahattin E

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  • dareco Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1717 W: 16 N: 840] (15143)
  • [2008-11-10 13:41]

A very nice portrait! I like the pose and expression. Good color and detail and excellent focus on her eyes. TFS

Ciao Antonella.
I go for 'red' lips ad without the nosering, haha
But the pose is lovely and her Hair, well, the young ones, right ?
Nice framing good job.
Regards, jan

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  • Fisher Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1254 W: 351 N: 944] (5728)
  • [2008-11-11 19:27]

Hi Antonella,

Beautiful portrait, nicely composed.
In most cases, usually, one focuses on the eye closest to the camera.

Hi Antonella..I love these shots of your beautiful daughter..great pose and tones...nicely done.

Roger

Another lovely capture of her - good light and nice skin tones, and an excellent job on the Replace Colour feature.

I love the scarf!

Rew

Hi Antonella,

These portraits of your daughter are a pleasure to look at - both your work and her beauty are a perfect combination.
As for PP work I have a niece who also tried explaning the steps and she also races through that programm, hard to follow indeed.

TFS
Els

Bom dia Antonella
The expression have a litlle sadness..she is lovely and you have captured really well. She´is a very expressive person.
it is always a pleasure and a nice moment to look
Flaminia.
The video is a sweet bonus.
have a nice day both of you.
kind regards
teresa

ciao Antonella!!

lovely track! thanks i like all versions in all languages:D
beautiful pic as always..superb compo and pose..
the focus is lost on the left eye but i like it makes the whole pic moody..
TFS

Kiss
Ania

Ciao Antonella, questa bella rossa mi sembra di averla già vista:)
Eh se ci provavo io con mia figlia mi aveva fracassato la nikon in testa..
Altro bel ritratto, grande espressività, complimenti a te e alla modella, ciao Silvio

scommetto quello che vuoi che è più facile cambiarle le labbra in photoshop che convincerla a cambiare rossetto......!!
come al solito espressione intensissima con un sorriso vagamente triste e lontano, una profondità di sguardo molto più antica di lei non senza una traccia di ironia.. come sempre bravissime tutte e due
un abbraccio
anna
ps il link lo apro dopo adesso sniff dovrei preparare una presentazione e vedi anche tu quanta voglia ne ho...peccato che domani debba proprio parlare a due corsi diversi su argomenti diversi con targets diversissimi ciao
anna

Beh allora ciao, per ora, Flaminia. Ti aspettiamo alla prossima serie. (magari con il rossetto rosso/nero) Complimenti Antonella per l'intensità del ritratto. Come dice Anna espressione indecifrabile ma d'effetto.

Roberto

Hello Antonella
Beautiful self portrait, very well composed, with handkerchief and the handles making a pleasant effect. Excelent light and colour. Great title.
Rgards, mb

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  • mamcg Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 217 W: 51 N: 166] (4620)
  • [2008-11-15 17:31]

Antonella, what I see is the difference in both eye as the right is more in focus and left a bit dull, as on the portrait we just look at the eyes.
well frame nice shot.
TFS.

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  • EOSF1 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1571 W: 126 N: 2228] (20439)
  • [2008-11-17 13:15]

Hello Antonella, you favorite model is still beautiful! :-) I like this pose and technically it's very good too, well done! Ciao!

Mario

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  • cinca Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 327 W: 2 N: 143] (4452)
  • [2008-11-17 14:24]

Ciao Antonella, nello sguardo intenso di tua figlia che tu sai cogliere con gran bravura leggo amore, lo stesso che trovo in quelli delle mie figlie, solo che loro non si prestano a far da modelle, sigh! Ben costruita anche per i richiami di colore capelli-labbra-foulard-spallina, ma la sua vera forza sta negli occhi.
Ciao, cinzia

eccellente trittico con bei ritratti di tua figlia(e vittima)Flaminia!!
un ottimo lavoro Antonella!!

ciao sERGIO

Tua figlia bellissima con gli'occhi carissimi!

Riccardo io

This shot like the last 2 has focusing issues. You have probably focused on the wall, the hair at the back of her hair is very sharp. I hope you can remember to focus on her eyes in your next session, then I will be happy.
Martin

ciao Antonella.. questa me l'ero persa..
le espressioni in tutte e tre i ritratti sono autentiche.. credo che sia questo che regala emozione nei tuoi ritratti..
anggiungerei che qui c'è anche un che di geometrico nelle forme del viso e delle spalle.. che si sposano benissimo insieme!! lo sguardo di flaminia è sempre molto intenso! ;))
ciao Marco

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  • Romeu Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 332 W: 0 N: 222] (1851)
  • [2008-12-17 16:36]

Boa Noite My friend
Flaminia is in a very nice pose.
I wish her and You a Merry Christmas
And good 2009.
Regards
Romeu

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  • harpya Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 5752 W: 198 N: 2563] (10054)
  • [2009-08-27 8:21]

Ciao Antonella


Beautiful portrait of your ego,
I like the pose, the beautiful
pair of eyes, also good light
and nice skin tones.
Congratulations,

Sergio

Bonjour Antonella.
La photo de portrait est tout un art et tu t’en es bien sorti avec ces belles présentations qui montrent une variation intéressante de prise de vue.
Les positions sont parfaites et les expressions sont aussi bien rendues avec de beaux regards.
Le manque de netteté au niveau des yeux peut-être compensés par une application de flou Hollywoodien sur le reste de la photo.
Félicitations pour ce bon travail.
Bonne journée.
Urs

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