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Swan
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Copyright: brian avery (bri) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 395 W: 1 N: 472] (2515)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2007-04-06
Categories: Nature
Camera: Canon 350D Digital Rebel, Canon EF 75-300mm Zoom
Exposure: f/7.0, 1/1250 seconds
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2008-11-23 15:10
Viewed: 232
Points: 6
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Mute Swan taken on a sunny April morniong with the sun quite low, the focal length i think should have been more of an f4 or 5.6 to throw the background further out of focus but i am pleased with this result.

The only editing to the photograph was to crop in.

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  • Jonela Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 378 W: 2 N: 379] (2779)
  • [2008-11-23 16:06]

Hi Brian,

Wow this is a brilliant shot of a mute swan colours nice and sharp well focused. PLEASE write notes it will benefit you as much as the viewers and critique others this will also help. Points can be given to 20 critiqued photo's in a 24hr period, this lets people know who you are and people that give point also give tips and that's what helps you most the tips and help. For the shot well done and TFS.

Regards
Jon

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  • deains Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 189 W: 33 N: 1172] (5041)
  • [2009-03-02 12:43]

Great one of a Mute Swan, Very good detail especially the nasal node & bill. Nitpick would be a little overexposed in the white around the eye but all else makes up for that. White for me is difficult too. If you don't shoot in raw you should try it, I find it helps to edit in raw & sometimes I can fix over & underexposure better than if I shot in jpeg. TFS Don

Hi Brian, very good swan portrait.
Well done. Ciao Mari

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