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• rewshearer (20905)
• [2008-11-27 0:35]
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Hi mate

I think you have done well with the light and the sharp detail of her face, the flowers, and the dress. Very well composed, too!

The PP is ok but unfortunately the veil created a problem that I don't think you've been able to successfully overcome. The veil should be sharply in focus, but the objects behind it should be blurred; but that's way too hard to recreate in PP.

I actually like the unaltered original, it doesn't need that soft background bokeh!

Rew
Rew

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• bakyy (1178)
• [2008-11-27 0:44]

hi Ramdan
beautiful Malaysian`s girl(women)
god work
regards Bane

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• Rabani (977)
• [2008-11-27 0:53]

Assalammualaikum Ram,
I liked this one better. The background is muted better and your halo/glow effect around her has that soft "fuzziness" which is just enough to my liking. Anymore and it would be "unnatural".

Glow/Halo should be soft, flimsy and gradually thinning. The idea is, halo is to express the subject but not making itself too obvious that it takes away attention to the subject. Anything you put into the photo should enhanced the subject more but not drawing attention to the enhancement.

And I enjoy watching her face and the bouquet in front of her. In wedding, your best gift is when the bride is happy with your works. I think, she will.

Abg

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• cunejo200 (17337)
• [2008-11-27 3:10]
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Hi Ramdan,
The bride's smile and happiness is beautifully captured. Lighting is quite effective, you did well in the focusing department. I honestly prefer the original. My best regards...Danilo

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• shelbeesmom (47988)
• [2008-11-27 5:46]
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A very beautiful model and bride here Ramdan! I love the glow here! Nice and sharp, her dress is very beautiful! I've never seen green roses! She must be very happy with this shot!
B-)
Linda

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• Janone (0)
• [2008-11-27 5:56]
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Hello Ramdan.
Not bad at all, but maybe the transition link is a bit too harsh. (too abrubt)
It should be more like a flashlight from the background.
Not sure if you had used 'highlight' (like in Picasa) it would look better.
But i'm sure they will be very happy with this result too.
Terima kasih.
Jan

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• tracer (7924)
• [2008-11-27 6:58]

a glowing smile indeed! well captured Ramdan. even without the glow effect its a perfect shot for me.

i a n

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• rigz (1066)
• [2008-11-27 15:50]

Assalamuallaikum Ramdan,

Pengantin was perfectly photographed. Great potrait. Superb sharpness and details. Lepas ini boleh jadi photographer pengantin full time. Congrats!

TFS,
Geoffrey Bin Ramji

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• wieyos (8970)
• [2008-11-27 21:19]

hasil kerja yang sempurna terutama pada wajah.
cuma mata yang nampak letih kemerahan itu boleh ditacap lagi.
efek aura pada sekeliling bahagian atas badan nampak macam sedikit keterlaluan, macam potret imej dewa-dewa kuil begitu.
yang selebihnya memang bagus - pose dan tangkapan yang bagus!

Salam
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• foozi (4608)
• [2008-11-27 23:52]

Assalamaualaikum Ramdan,
excellently done. Beautifully processed and the the subject is very well touched up.
The shot renders a very meaningful moment to the bride.
well done...and youre very good in this stuff.

Regards,
Foozi

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• boomcat (16869)
• [2008-12-08 23:44]

kalo ko suruh sa pilih kan adhan.. sa bilang tu workshop lagilah cantik.. yg ne mcm angel gia ne ada cahaya diluar badan da.. hehehe.. mcm studio shot saja..

sayang mata pompuan ne besar eyebag da.. patut da tau da mo kawin kasih cukup rehat tidur ne teruja mau kawin nda tidur2 nah tu mata bida.. bukan kau ah.. apa pon punyalah terang ne.. buli tahan well done..

nong