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Self Portrait


Self Portrait
Photo Information
Copyright: Kelly Ruysseveldt (Aspara) (263)
Genre: People
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2008
Categories: Portrait
Camera: Canon Digital Ixus 75
Details: (Fill) Flash: Yes
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2009-01-04 11:53
Viewed: 217
Points: 5
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Trying something new for a change: self portraits.

Converted to black and white, and adjusted brightness and contrast.

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  • karl Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 145 W: 43 N: 41] (726)
  • [2009-01-04 12:16]

Hi, nice portrait !

I like the eyes and hair, but also feel that the lower part of the face is overexposed, may be due to the flashlight you used or by edition. may be you could use a softer reflected flashlight to get both zones well lighted

Karl

Hi Kelly..I like the pose but the washed out white area makes you look too harsh..I would cut the flash down or out, play with the shadow and highlight slider in Photoshop and play with the light.. you are a great subject..keep playing.

Roger

Salut Kelly

toujours difficile de faire des autoportraits !

mais la nature aide bien les choses ici !

jp007

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