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Macro on flower
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| Photo Information |
| Copyright: Fabian Peter (fabpeter) (13) |
| Genre: Places |
| Medium: Color |
| Date Taken: 2005-08-15 |
| Categories: Nature |
| Camera: Nikon Coolpix 8800 |
| Exposure: f/5.2 |
| More Photo Info: [view] |
| Photo Version: Original Version |
| Date Submitted: 2009-01-08 0:48 |
| Viewed: 220 |
| Points: 3 |
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| [Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note [French] |
Macro on a plant of the botanical garden of Porrentruy.
Microcosm is attractive and reveals sometimes hidden treasures… |
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Olá Fabian,
Nice capture. You are right, macro reveals great hiddens beauties.
Very good composition and idea. Abit out of focus.
TFS
Raimundo
Hello Fabian,
A very well conceived macro where you examine the very centre of the flower.
The off-centre composition and the colours are fine.
However, the focus is not sharp enough.
I'm sure you will learn to be more critical with your shots. I can remember studying all the other shots in the gallery, to get to grips with how sharp shots needed to be, when I started posting.
Good luck.
Kind regards,
Bev :-)
- Ivan
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(3854) - [2009-01-08 3:54]
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Bonjour Fabian,
J'aime bien la composition et le côté épuré de l'arrière plan blanc. Il se dégage une pureté de cette fleur. Par contre, il manque une zone de mise au point bien nette pour guider l'œil. La macro a une courte profondeur de champs, il est essentiel de l'exploiter au maximum.
L'encadrement est sobre et efficace, il met bien la photographie en valeur.
Salutations de Québec,
Ivan
