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for Lucio Red (Brave Heart)


for Lucio Red (Brave Heart)
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Copyright: Burak Oktenli (burak28) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1244 W: 91 N: 1312] (16284)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2008-09-18
Categories: Nature
Camera: Sony DSC-H50
Photo Version: Original Version
Theme(s): reflections of life, Roses From Around the World, why backslapping is wrong [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2009-01-08 22:41
Viewed: 1021
Favorites: 1 [view]
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[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Refracted Light

Life,
An easy thing to demolish,
A gentle beast needing a hug,
The sweet caress of the dieing wind.

Light and color is all we see,
Everything can be taken down to tiny little molecules,
Creating the muffin in our mouth,
Causing the pain in our stomachs.

In darkness, nothing is real,
The hand in front of your face dies,
Is it real anymore?
Is it still there?

Close your eyes and everything disappears,
Light is lost,
And with no light there is nothing around us,
We reach out but know not what the object is.

So can we be sure anything is real,
Or the way light is,
The sunlight pouring down,
The lamp giving light to the room,
Does it refract what something or someone else wants us to see?

Pick up a teddy bear,
Then close your eyes,
Is it still a teddy bear?
Of course in our mind it appears.
But is that the actual bear,
Or simply a memory?

Evan Skora

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Good morning dear friend,

it is more than just good to see a new image from you. I hope everything is OK.

This is great dedication to Lucio...and the nickname Brave Heart is also very fitting. :):)

Superb macro shot of this beautiful rose. Colours and details are outstanding. I love the photographer's note (nice poem).

Have a great day and enjoy every minute of it,

Stasa

Selam Burak, geri döndüğünü görmek güzel. Zihay zeminde harika bir pembe gül makrosu olmuş. Eline sağlık.
Bayram

Selam Buarak,
Özlemişim güzel fotoğraflarını...
Işık duygusu çok güzel.i Fluluk etkinliğini arttırmış. Gözlerinden öperim. Annene babana selamlar
Selahattin E

Lucky Lucio Red. What a beautiful pink rose! Great colors, sharpness and lighting. Looks perfect against the dark background. TFS

Lorena

Wow
perfect Image Burak..
realy good, very soft pink color and the light coming from background is giving great effect.
tfs
regards
nipun

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  • Nushy Gold Star Critiquer [C: 145 W: 0 N: 0] (0)
  • [2009-01-09 0:40]

Hi Burak,

what a wonderful image! Great dedication to Lucio. :)

Really, amazing image...colours, composition, POV...everything is great.

Have a nice day,

Nusa

Hi my friend...
Beautiful work...
Regards...
Andro

Hello Burak! Amazing rose. Wonderful light and colours. Ideal capture. Nice picture, very nice. Good luck!

here I am
ahahhaha
thanks for brave heart but I made just simple thing
My mission was to make you smile but happened a world crisis !!!
thanks very much dear friend
I appreciate very much
good work and colours(black and white are colours too remember!!!)
good effect and well framed
ciao
Lucio

happy you back!!
this world need Burak!

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  • nicou Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1302 W: 0 N: 2586] (20765)
  • [2009-01-09 1:27]

Hello,

Merveilleuse fleur qu tu offre à Lucio, quelle douceur et délicatesse, ce rendu sur les pétales est fantastique.

Bravo et amitié

Nicou

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  • Koala Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 391 W: 32 N: 90] (4023)
  • [2009-01-09 2:37]

great dedication to our friend Lucio!
very nice shot,beautiful beautiful flower and very well captured and presented as usual,my friend!
Hope you are good and good luck with your exams....mine's just now begin :((

Have a great weekend!

Alexandra

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  • ayse51 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1705 W: 124 N: 1455] (20570)
  • [2009-01-09 2:55]

Merhaba Burak!cım,
çok güzel bir pembe gül makrosu.Siyah zeminde çok yakışmış.Ellerine sağlık.Necla.

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  • lele Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 814 W: 51 N: 1717] (11169)
  • [2009-01-09 3:15]

coao burak..grande lavoro
era da tempo che non ti facevi vedere...
grande lavoro
soggetto ben ripreso
composizione gradevole
complimenti
lele

Hello Burak!
Beautiful light and lovely pink rose in your picture!
Very well done!
Best regards!
Lili

Hi Burak,
It's good to see your post again on TL. Nicely done macro photo of this pinkish flower, the light coming from above is awsome and give a calm, peaceful mood to your image. Well frmed and presented, good dedication. TFS.
Greetings,
Kristof

Merhaba Burak,

This is very interesting use of the light.
The petals resemble delicate tissue paper.
I like the soft textural details and the contrast with the dark b/g.

Kind regards,
Bev :-)

Hi Burak
this is a fascinating presentation of a rose.
very special. perfect lighting. beautiful colors. splendid gift to a friend.
nice note.
greetings
tsilla

Hello Burak, this is a very beautiful dedication.
I liked the way you shot this flower. looks very soft and beautiful!

Have a great weekend!
Cheers,
SHubhi:)

Hi Burak Bonjour,
Great dedication to Lucio,
Supers Macro picture and well presented,
Excellent POV. and details.
very well done
Michel

Hello my friend Burak,
A perfect rose for a dreary winter. Superb focus on the vivid petals, fantastic exposure. My best regards...Danilo

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  • ade71 Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 235 W: 37 N: 206] (2812)
  • [2009-01-09 8:40]

Hi Burac, good shot, delicate colours and good dedication. Thank you my friend, Adele

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  • mbrito Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1631 W: 118 N: 2816] (11348)
  • [2009-01-09 8:59]

Hello Burack
What a wonderful work; excelent light and compo (superb the soft shine on top), and a beautiful colour. And great title too; Lucio will love it for sure, I do.
Congrats, mb

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  • milas Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2733 W: 412 N: 2987] (32833)
  • [2009-01-09 9:37]

Merhaba Burak,
Yazılılardan başını alamadın galiba, yada iphone den, hergün bakıyorum, yoksun, ama beklediğimize değdi yani, harika bir çalışma olmuş, tebrikler...selamlar....

Merhaba Burak, beautiful rose, splendid colors and wonderful light fine details, lovely dedication to our friend Lucio, very well done, ciao Silvio
OH LUCIO E NUN TE MONTA LA TESTA MOH:)

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  • Saba Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 584 W: 0 N: 1590] (9151)
  • [2009-01-09 10:54]

Merhaba Burak!

Beautiful, wondrful flower...ROSE!!!
Congratulate picture!

Greetings.
Barbara

Merhaba Burak,
Nerelerdesin be oğul? Sınavlar mı?
Muhteşem gözalıcı bir macro.
Eline sağlık. Öpüyorum.
Dr.Seyfettin Güner

A splendid image to mark your return, Burak!
This is top work, proving that minimalism can only bring quality and refinement to such an image!
A superb choice for Lucio!
Best regards and COMPLIMENTS,
Diana ;)

wow very nice shot for Lucio, good shot against black background.

cheers
cris(",)

Lovely ros nicely lit with the backlighting.There seems to be a very bright pinprick of light on the lower petals. I think this detracts. I like the softer one however a little further down.Interesting poem. I guess it underlines the importance of faith. Hebrews 11 defines faith as "being sure of what we hope for and certain of what we do not see"
TFS
warm regards
David

Selam dear Burak!

I´m glad you see you again :D you´re someone that can´t be out here.
Great gift to Lucio, this a lovel rose, so delicate.
Very good sharpness, well done!

best regards
Marco

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  • karith Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1067 W: 80 N: 1173] (7421)
  • [2009-01-10 22:00]

Oh my, a simply stunning rose! Excellent light and composition, giving this an elegant presentation. Well done:)

its not the sharpest but i still like it, Burak.. very lovely close up.. i like the small light from up there.. nice colour in soft.. tfs..

regards, terry

Merhaba Burak,
Özlettin kendini bu aralar...Harika bir makro çalışma.Eline sağlık.
Selamlar,

hAyAti

OOoooo Burakcığım,harika bir çekim olmuş.Siyah fon ile nefis görünüyor.Ellerine sağlık.Kendine iyi bak,sevgiler :)

koçum yeni yilin kutlu olsun!
ömer!

Burak Merhaba,
Bu fotoğraf ancak bukadar güzel çekilir,Ellerine sağlık.
Tebrikler.
Ataman

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  • chrisJ Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 4248 W: 414 N: 6735] (42365)
  • [2009-01-13 4:37]

Merhaba Burak

I like the translucent, pink petals of the flower. Good sharpness, colour & use of a shallow dof. The black bg makes the colour 'pop'. Tfs!

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  • Romeu Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 332 W: 0 N: 222] (1851)
  • [2009-01-13 5:59]

Hi Burak
I like your photo very much and Lucio seems to be a brave man.
Nice to meet Skora.
Have a good day my friend
Romeu

Boa tarde B.O
A wonderful photo and a a beautiful gift to a soul men and dedicate father.
Have a good day my friend
Um abraço
teresa

Hello Burak
wonderful flower and effect of the flower
good light and sharpness
Paolo

Ciao Burak
bella foto dedicata a mio papà
bel lavoro
Marco

Merhaba Burak!
Excellent flower,very good sharp and Nice soft color.
TFS - Congratulations!
Kostas

hi burak, the comnbination of the well opened rose which underlines teh fragility of time passing and our own lives, and the note is very touching
i like the atmosphere they jointly create as well as the depth of your thoughts
bravo
anna

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  • lavan Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 695 W: 2 N: 126] (3446)
  • [2009-02-09 0:58]

nice work
good composition
well done

Such a touching poem, Burak! In combination with the delicate rose, it conveys a powerful message.

So impressive from someone soooo young!

Keep shooting and sharing such wonderful words . . . and photos!

Richard

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  • foozi Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 595 W: 0 N: 957] (4612)
  • [2009-03-13 20:30]

Merhaba Burak,
excellent presentation of this soft and pestel petals. The glows is simply brilliant and it gives a good impact with the backlighting.

Regards,
Foozi

Merhaba Burak
this rose is amazing
wonderful gift for our dear friend
nice sharpness and light effect
perfect BG for this beauty
Have a grate day my friend!
Oana

Hi, Burak. Love the refracted light and the note
Beautiful photograph of this rose from a correct angle. The depth of field, contrast , color, composition, and point of view is excellent. Congratulations on a good choice of this subject. Cheers and thanks for sharing. shaukat

Hello Burak,
Very nice translucent quality to these petals which work very well against the black BG.
Have a good WE. Joni

Hi Burak,

Great shot of this lovely rose!
I like very much the soft light and color!
Excellent idea and realisation!
Congratulations and TFS

Um grande abraço,
Sergio

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