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Twisted


Twisted
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Copyright: Jahanzeib Malik (KBE) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 446 W: 103 N: 582] (2707)
Genre: Places
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2009-01-16
Categories: Daily Life, Artwork, Decisive Moment, Experimental, HPP [Heavily Post-Processed]
Camera: NIKON D200, Nikkor AF 28-70mm f/3.5-4.5D
Exposure: f/10.0, 1/400 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2009-01-22 13:26
Viewed: 289
Points: 24
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Hi all

I am back after a short gap in my uploads due to certain reasons :) (Hidden :P)

Ok this one was shot last Friday when we 3 TLs went for a out door shooting (Me, Mark25 and Athlon). I specially thank to Muhsin (mark25) for this opportunity and his company along with Abid (Athlon).

We drove out of the city like about 20 kms, our 1st stop was a wrecked cars junk yard where we took some shorts, I and Muhsin tried panorama too (my 1st experience) though mine didn’t work out good as I had no idea about panoramas.

Coming back to this shot. Ok, as we stepped out of car (jeep) I saw this barbed wire all around the junk yard (for protection purpose may be) and found it interesting to show a TENSIONED expressing composition.
I took couple of shots with diff POVs and f stops, however I found this one worked out quite well, ok this one is not taken with IR filter :) its converted to IR in Photoshop CS3 Extended (Bridge). I am also posting original composition in workshop with a little different POV just for the contrast :)

Thanks for giving ur time to stop and viewing. Looking for ur feedback.

Cheers
JZM
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simple et efficace, bravo!

Nice work. Simple subject, well managed shallow DOF and b&w gradients, with good background bokeh from that lens.

I guess the wire could have lead-in more perfectly from the lower-left corner, but it's not a big deal!

Rew

ciao Jahanzeib..
these are images with a big impact.. not by the title you have chosen.. but for the symbolism that barber wide always rapresents, of course.. ;))
excellent pov and focus.. use of b&w is perfect here!! well done
thanks
ciao Marco

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  • Shahs Silver Star Critiquer [C: 26 W: 0 N: 1] (170)
  • [2009-01-23 1:30]

very good work.

Noor Ahmad Shah

Hi Jahanzeib
Very nice details and great work.
Regards.
A.

Salam Jahanzeib jaan,
Very nice b&W macro.Excellent DOF and blur BG.TFS.
Regards,
hAyAti

Olá, Jahanzeib!

A simple and great shot!
Very nice DOF and PP work!
Well done job! TFS :o)

Brazilian greetings,
Bruno

Salam Jahanzeib

What a nice experimental shot of this great figure which you nicely titled it as "twisted". Good B/W mode, TFS.

ALIREZA

Hello KBE! Good idea and very good capture. Great effect. Well done!

well framed, well balanced, i like the way you saw it
jc

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  • Janice Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3265 W: 267 N: 7730] (32968)
  • [2009-01-29 16:50]
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It is good to go out together with TL friends
I like your PP work here JZM, giving it the B&W touch - makes the barbed wire look quite cruel
TFS
Janice

Hi Jahanzeib
nice work and good pov
wonderful focus in the foreground
ciao
Lucio

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