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Berlin Fashion


Berlin Fashion
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Copyright: Manu Manu (manulvu) (191)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2007-08-18
Categories: Artwork
Camera: Nikon D-70s, Tamron 28-300mm XR Di f3.5-6.3
Exposure: f/6.3, 1/80 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Theme(s): kobieta ze snu #3 [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2009-02-05 14:07
Viewed: 286
Points: 0
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Open air fashion show in Berlin.
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Good idea to take a picture at a fashion show but I think this shot needs improvement in some areas -
* it lacks sharpness - no motion blur but at f6.3 the whole model should be sharp
* the composition is far too centralized
* the POV you've used hasn't done the picture any favours - the metalwork behind her is a distraction, as is the large black area to the right of the frame
* the models hands have been cropped out of the shot - it makes the picture seems a little untidy.
Thanks......Mark

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