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MARINA


MARINA
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Copyright: JeM Basar (BAKO) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor [C: 78 W: 11 N: 8] (744)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2005-06-14
Categories: Portrait
Camera: Nikon D-70, AF-S Nikkor 18-70mm
Exposure: f/4.5, 1/75 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2005-06-16 8:11
Viewed: 1319
Points: 14
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
One of my friend from St.Petersburg.
I convert it to duotone
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  • Good 
  • SRB Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 106 W: 0 N: 51] (803)
  • [2005-06-16 8:37]

i like the pose of the model and the duotone is also great. but the model is to awhere of the camera. maybe if she would look down or away to the left, the picture would be more intense.
SRB

bako..,

This is really an excellent portrait, It may not got such beauty with out duo.

It is very Good in many aspects like,
ur model's hair,
little tilt of her face,
legs position & placing,
catching her expressive eyes,
especially the YELLOW ring.
Overall makes ur fren attractive, making ur shot excellent.

But, if u dont mind, i have few points to note here,
Background is more distracting, in the right top corner, with its brightness.
It might be more perfect if the 2 hand is also covered a bit more,
little bit of hair is distracting on center of her fore head,
a small black spot (may be mole) is also a little bit disturbing the shade just below her left eye.
dont mind one again.

Anyways, i cant resist myself viewing this shot many a times, thats such good.

Have a Nice TIme.....
prajju

  • Great 
  • opti Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 19 W: 6 N: 21] (537)
  • [2005-06-16 8:52]
  • [+]

J'ai pris un instant avant de me rendre compte que c'était ses genoux. Est-ce moi qui est obsédé ou ... l'effet est sublime ;-)

très belle votre amie Bahadir, et en + elle à de la bonté dans le regard. belle image.

Very nice, you catched those eyes full of innocence beautifully!

A really great capture, she almost looks surprised to see you. I love the black and white with a spot of yellow. The grainy texture and tight crop work well with this photo. Nice job, BAKO!

Cheers,
Alli

I wanna ask you again WHY..

All perfect except the fact that the model seems a bit scared of the camera, which ruins a bit the physical mood of the photo.

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