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Farid
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Copyright: bhot manabat (bhobot) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 208 W: 16 N: 343] (1924)
Genre: People
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2009-03-11
Categories: Friends/Family, Experimental, Action, Mood, Portrait
Camera: Canon EOS 450D (Rebel XSi), Cannon 50mm, f1.8
Exposure: f/1.8, 1/400 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2009-03-11 5:25
Viewed: 399
Points: 32
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
i took this earlier when my friend came here to my workplace he wants to say Goodbye cause he is going to leave tommorow to go back his country..

using my 50mm lens put in aperture priority and set my iso in 1600..

conversation in black and white
adjust in channel mixer..

here the result.

thanks for dropinby..

chrisJ, Tomek, adilakbar, Saba, boomcat, manujmehta, ele_eng, cunejo200, Natasa-David has marked this note useful
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HI Bhot..nice portrait ...well composed..nice range of tones...nice light.

Roger

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  • chrisJ Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 4259 W: 414 N: 6797] (42610)
  • [2009-03-11 6:07]

Hi bhot

I almost ended up working in the UAE, so thanks for showing what the inhabitants look like. A superb b&w portrait with a direct gaze, but without the fake smile. Good shadow detail on the face. Tfs!

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  • Tomek Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1318 W: 47 N: 2926] (16844)
  • [2009-03-11 6:27]

Nice portrait Bhot:):)
I'll work a bit about these shadows on face... anyway it is posed but look natural:)
Good work - Tom:)

Hello, Goodbye, ....
Good capture, Bhot. Perfect memoriy picture of your friend.
Cheers from Jan

Hi Bhot,
Nice portrait. Good DOF and sharpness. Nice composition and B/W looks good. TFS - Regards - Adil.

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  • Saba Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 605 W: 0 N: 1662] (9389)
  • [2009-03-11 11:58]
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Hello Bhot!

Very pretty portrait, interesting formulation.
Raining from cap on face shadow looks curiously.

I congratulate realization.
I greet You warmly.
Barbra

Good portrait bhot but i think ridding of the cap shadow on the face will make it better. Maybe you can use a different place where the light will prevent this shadow or use fill-in flash to eliminate it.

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  • AKITA Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1052 W: 81 N: 66] (12615)
  • [2009-03-11 21:35]
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dear Bhot,
his expression (especially eyes in the shadow and tilt mouth) is impressive and lyric.
it is very effective that he is leaning his head to right (his left) side, and also it is suggestive that this was taken against the light.
those all show us his calm and tender characteristics so well.
thank you,
Akihisa

hello Bhot,

nice potrait of your friend here.. he look kind of bored err not bored but i forget the word.. probably wondering whether to smile or not.. still its a lovely potrait.. nice work.. :)

regards, terry

Hi Bhot,
Pretty sharp portrait of the guy, the black and white tones work great here. The shadow on his face made by his baseball cap may be a bit disturbing, but nothing serious. TFS.
Greetings,
Kristof

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  • bupga Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 305 W: 6 N: 369] (2735)
  • [2009-03-12 23:41]

New lens Bhot? I guess 50mm fixed, good shot I like the dof from by f/1.8, well done shot! may sense critiques in boy george am fully agreed!


Buds

hello Bhot
how are you doing?
impressive shot
good black and white conversion
good light and fine expression
nice profile shot
good shadow

regards
Manuj Mehta

Hi Bhot
Good portrait of your friend as I think he must be Iranian (of his name).
Just if I were you, I asked him to rotate his hat to eliminate shadow on his face. Well done
Regards, Alireza :)

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  • trekks Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2027 W: 147 N: 3408] (13641)
  • [2009-03-21 2:57]

hi bhot

Nicely captured portrait although he looks a bit blank in expression but he looks straight into camera. The exposure looks strong on the hat. Surprisingly not much noise for iso1600. Nicely done in B&W.

tfs, bill

Hi Bhot,
Good to see your work again. A handsome model he is, well framed, the shadow from his cap created good contrast. Ingat hija. Danilo

Hi Bhot.

It's been a while! :-) Very interesting portrait, with good bw tones and interesting shadows that is falling on a models face.

Have a nice day!
David

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