dear dear dandelion

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• Sharpshooter (6922)
• [2009-03-16 12:16]
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Hi Oana,
Nice use of the focus, but I'm not really a fan of the composition chosen. Would have looked better off to one side. I've done a workshop for you, hope you don't mind. Nice colours and clarity though.

Thanks for sharing,
Scott.

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• joopschotsman (5549)
• [2009-03-16 12:19]
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Hi Oana,
Great colors and a good depth of focus.
Also the chosen point of view is okay. The composition isn't. One of the rules is to nearly never place the main object in the centre.
Learn to creat borders too; it will make your images even better.
greetings,
Joop!

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• mortcdz (53)
• [2009-03-16 13:40]
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Nice bright colours and details are quite sharp. Personally I think the central composition can work with a single circular flower like this - theres a sense of symmetry and placement about it when there is no other details to take the eye.
Thanks for sharing
Mark

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• roges (5250)
• [2009-03-16 14:45]
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Salve!
Ai dat lovitura!
Cite de puncte la o poza !
Bravo tine-o tot asa !
Adrian

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• hifimusicdai (5595)
• [2009-03-16 19:01]
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This is clearly not written by a gardener. lol
Nice macro though. Possibly a change of pov would have ensured all the bg was green ( the bottom left is a little distracting.) TFS
warm regards
David