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Boracay i
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Copyright: Gerald Pingol (geraldpingol) (133)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2009-03-20
Categories: Portrait
Camera: Canon PowerShot A420
Exposure: f/8, 1/200 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2009-03-25 4:16
Viewed: 421
Points: 22
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Wifey in Bora
Cybershot w90
PP in PS CS3 :)
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Very nice portrait, good light and an interesting BG setting the scene...

Pretty wife..

Cheers
DAvid

Hi Gerald,
nice portrait and pov. i like the result of pp work.
beautiful.

regards,
yopie

Hello Gerald,
A captivating portrait in the "glamour" genre. I like the pose of your model, her (apparent) indifference for what is surrounding her. Interesting textures and colours as well, combining rather "rusty" settings with the smoothness of your model's skin.
My only (small) minus is the crop on the upper side: it now gives the impression you did not achieve to get her entirely in your viewfinder. In other words, the crop is too "careful", too discreet. Either I would have shown her head entirely, or I would have done a more severe crop. But not this "in-between" solution. Just my personal opinion, of course. Feel free to (dis)agree ;o)
TFS & kind regards,
Erik

Hi!Gerald,
Beautiful portrait,Nice composition and great background.Colors fantastic and beautiful modele.
Good work with PS. Well Done Bravo!
Tfs
Gaston

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  • rlrad Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 99 W: 9 N: 215] (830)
  • [2009-03-25 5:27]

Hi Gerald,

This is a great portrait - it caught my eye in the gallery, I had to click. Then I am treated to this excellent image. You captured your beautiful wife very well, the photograph shows your love for her. Great post processing job, too. The depth of field is great, as are the colors and control of the grey cloudy sky. Keep up the good work!

Have a beautiful day,
Reed Radcliffe
St. Louis, Missouri, USA

I love this! It's different, it's stylish and I love your treatment here. Is it HDR? Marvelous "attitude" a totally different pose than most portraits!
B-)
Linda

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  • Shogun Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 832 W: 52 N: 418] (10391)
  • [2009-03-25 6:05]

nice Gerald! i like the composition and pp work. tfs

OgGie

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  • Leica Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 82 W: 41 N: 60] (2115)
  • [2009-03-25 6:54]

Great work. Lovely tones.

Nice photo.

If you want to receive feedback on your photos, may I suggest -

a) a proper photographer's note to talk about your work

A photographer's note gives viewers an idea of what you wanted to achieve, how you tried to achieve it, and will allow them to offer more helpful critiques.

b) you also critique other people's photos.

Critiquing is a great exercise in both learning about photography, and making acquaintances with other photographers.

Rew

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  • ramon Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 272 W: 20 N: 685] (3311)
  • [2009-03-25 12:34]

Hi Gerald,

Very good portrait, POV and composition
is great. Well done...

Cheers,
Ramon

Hi Gerald...nice shot...great perspective...nicely done.

Roger

nice color effect. what pp work did you do?

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