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White square


White square
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Copyright: Yitzhak Avigur (Avigur) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 144 W: 49 N: 141] (747)
Genre: Places
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2004-01-08
Categories: Architecture
Camera: Fujifilm FinePix F601 ZOOM
Exposure: f/6.3, 1/640 seconds
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2004-04-01 13:27
Viewed: 1266
Points: 24
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
It's almost a night shot.
This mmonument is called White Square. Designed by architect Danny Caravan. it's a concrete square, standing on hill in the edge of Tel Aviv, contains a concrete pyramid, a tower and some other simple shaped concrete bodies, all in white concrete.
This place became a great fun place for children, including my kids. The white concrete is not so white, unfortunately, due to time, erosion and low mwintenance, but it is still beutiful.
Taken just after sunset time.
zto, nwoehnl, Midnight_sun, Summer89, Luko, Derek, swallace, piozac, manny, carolynanna, Isabelle has marked this note useful
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  • zto Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 946 W: 120 N: 59] (262)
  • [2004-04-01 14:01]

There is so much of you in this picture Yitzhak. The high contrast and the dark apperance. I like the difrent shapes, they make the picture more intresting. The bottom of the picture is very heavy but due to those shapes the picture as a whole is well balanced.

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  • Luko Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 111 W: 53 N: 198] (445)
  • [2004-04-01 16:11]

very nice to see the other faces of some photographers in TL. I couldn't guess that was one of your shots, yitzhak...really really different than usual TE postings.

Very nice, I appreciate this kind of minimalistic but atmospheric shot.

Interesting how so many different shapes can fit into one dark shot. I also like how those darkish clouds fit just into the space above the rooftop and left of the column. Very black, and very good, Yitzhak.

Strange and mysterieuse architecture returned by the photograph, a special environment, well considering.

Quite a heavy shot, i like how the steps lead up out of the shot, i wish there were more somehow. I would never have guessed this is place children play, i thought it was a factory, a nice slight of hand you've used with the confusing scale. Great shot.

Great sinlhuettes Yitzhak. It's a great composition.

Well done

  • Great 
  • Derek Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 56 W: 25 N: 88] (311)
  • [2004-04-01 17:30]

A nice mix of angles and geometric shapes...and even a White Sqaure made to look black:-)

Very mysterious shot. The dark clouds and the silohuettes. A good job at spotting a good photo opportunity. Very interesting photo.

Great shot Avigur! Moody one. I like that the black part covers most of the picture. Great sky as well.
Very well done!

  • Great 
  • manny Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 525 W: 24 N: 1485] (11941)
  • [2004-04-02 12:25]

GREAT! Bold and daring composition. Like the dominance of black here! Mysterious?

Very engaging geometry, especially against the b/w sky. This doesn't look like a "fun" place, but you've captured some of its other characteristics.

  • Great 
  • yttt Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor [C: 270 W: 10 N: 3] (2114)
  • [2004-10-07 15:31]

interessting contur

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