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Still Life 2009


Still Life 2009
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Copyright: Mujahid Awais (Mujahid-Awais) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 901 W: 137 N: 599] (5553)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2009-06-02
Categories: Artwork
Camera: 20D, Canon 17-40 f/4 L
Exposure: f/16, 1/13 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2009-06-02 11:20
Viewed: 535
Points: 94
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HelloMujahid,
Texture, light and composition...
All of hem excellent...A masterpiece...
TFS
Selahattin E

Bonjour Mujahid.
La douceur de cette lumière donne à ces objets un bon relief et des couleurs bien équilibrés.
La disposition des carafes dans le volume du cadre est aussi bien équilibrée.
Bravo pour cette belle composition.
Bonne semaine, a bientôt.
Urs

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  • juyona Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 2646 W: 1 N: 1268] (15457)
  • [2009-06-02 11:31]

Hola amigo,
fina composición,
agradables detalles y pov.
saludos Mujahid

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  • jan515 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2488 W: 56 N: 3862] (17484)
  • [2009-06-02 11:36]

Hello Mujahid,

an interesting composition makes the picture super with excellent light. The structure of the photography is excellent.
Regards.
Janusz

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  • chendis Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 527 W: 199 N: 779] (5403)
  • [2009-06-02 11:37]

Hi Mujahid
artistic presentation, grate tones and light
is like a painting
Beautiful!

Greetings,
Oana

and you are always welcome with your beautiful shots
always a pleasure to look your new photos
very well composed and great effect of the soft light and shadows
perfect background
ciao
Lucio

Salam Mujahid,
Good capture of still life. Good exposure with natural light. Like the composition and texture in this image. TFS - Regards - Adil.

Hello Mujahid,
I guess the quality of the light, together with the composition, does do the trick. Super still life.
TFS.
Joop!

Boa noite Mujahid
Fantastic light and textures. Perfect...
My regards
teresat

Hello Mujahid,
A well presented still life with a cane background!
A nice set up but I would prefer to add some bounce flashlight and light the background to bring forth the rim of the utensils!
I posted a workshop just to show my idea!
A pleasing warm color.
Well done

Francis Xavier

Hi Mujahid
Very nice presentation,beautiful tones and texture,excellent lighting.
TFS
Regards
Andrzej

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  • ayse51 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1719 W: 124 N: 1479] (20826)
  • [2009-06-02 14:03]

Hi Mujahid,
great compo and great art work.Colours nad light are perfect.TFS.Necla.

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  • Dot Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1444 W: 31 N: 3112] (12652)
  • [2009-06-02 16:13]

HI Mujahid
the muted earthy tones show up well with that side lighting.
The sharpness seems to be on the tall urn, while the others a bit blurred blend in nicely, giving soft results like a painting.
Dot

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  • dareco Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1717 W: 16 N: 840] (15143)
  • [2009-06-02 19:09]

A very beautiful still life! Nice sharp detail and lovely warm tones. TFS

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  • KBE Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 452 W: 103 N: 597] (2759)
  • [2009-06-02 20:32]
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Asalam o Alikum Mujahid sahab.
Very simple and effective, in still life the most difficult part is the arrangement of eliments. I guess u face the same thing :)

Nice color tones, i like the base and BG.

Good job
TFS
Regards,
JZM

the subjects are majestic,light wonderful,pov excellent,colors and texture great and composition superb.TFS

Hi Mujahid

A very graphic and clever composition.
I LOVE it.
My compliments

ciao Mujaihid..
really interesting tones.. realise has something cool.. expecially for loght and texture.. great job! many thanks
ciao Marco

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  • trekks Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2027 W: 147 N: 3408] (13641)
  • [2009-06-03 0:26]

hi Mujahid

Although I am not sure why there is slight blur on the 3 still objects, I like your setup to have this presentation with the light. I like the choice of mat which blends well with the color of the objects.

Did you apply some blur effect?

tfs, bill

Hello Mujahid,

I am impressed with your creativity with this photo. Good attention has been given to your arrangement of the vessels and the woven matting. Superb use of natural materials, I like your idea here.

Just two small suggestions for improvement, i.e. I would prefer more light to bring out more of the impressive character of each vessel. The suggestion is to post a bigger photo.

Awesome composition. I congratulate you. Well done! Tfs.

Martyn

Not comparable to your previous posts, but still nice to see another of your great shot/
The warm colors are eyecatching as well. TFS> Alireza

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  • pozaru Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3579 W: 737 N: 2415] (19132)
  • [2009-06-03 2:22]

A bit small but very beautiful still !

thanks,
v

Hello Mujahid,
A fine and sumptuous still life. I can sense this was carefully staged and metered. The background mat is conducive in enhancing details and symmetry of the jugs. My best regards...
Danilo

Hi MujahiD,
Beautiful presentation and composition,
Excellent POV. and details.
beautiful tone of colors and light,
very sharp and clear,nice relief and shadow,
Very well taken and done .as usual...
all my compliments
Michel

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  • harpya Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 5757 W: 198 N: 2577] (10106)
  • [2009-06-03 8:37]

Ciao Mujahid,



This is a well composed presentation,
where the elements in front works as lead-in...
Fine details and the sepia toning adds to the mood!

Greetings,

Sergio

Olá Mujahid

Bonita foto, interessante e com ótima composição e luz. Um excelente trabalho
de texturas, meus parabéns!
GA
Vera

Hello Mujahid!
Amazing lighting ,warm colours
and soft tones in your image!
A fine still life with a cane
background,and special texture!
you create a great compo!,friend!
Compliments and TFS
Kostas

Salam Bro,
What a superb still life study.Great lighting and textures.TFS.
Regards,

hAyAti

Bonsoir Mujahid,

Interesting still life. The light and the colors of the elements make it almost a Sepia picture. BG has nice texture that complement the delicatness of the vases. Directionnal light creates nice volumes. I am not quite sure the composition is balanced. I got the feeling their is excessive weight (mass) on the left. You should try some other variation with the same subject. That's the way to learn. Still a very nice picture. TFS.

Alain

Hi Mujahid, a splendid and artistic work.
Perfect one!
TFS and cheers,
Bayram

Hi Mujahid...great shot..wonderful tones and details...great soft liight.

Roger

simple and yet so beautiful.. another beautiful capture and this time its the still life subject.. well done and well presented..

regards, terry

Hello Mujahid,

Again a great job, minimalist and classic at the same time!
Congratulations and TFS
Sergio

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  • clic Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 758 W: 0 N: 206] (4714)
  • [2009-06-06 6:59]
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Hello Mujahid
When I open your exhibits I always have the impression of being in an art gallery!!
You are endowed with an exceptional sense of perfection.
Thanks for this piece of art.
Robert

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  • Beger Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3315 W: 789 N: 4433] (19960)
  • [2009-06-06 7:59]
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Hi Mujahid,
Very beautiful still life presentation! Superb composition with this curved line.
I like the warm atmophere et de good rendering of the light and textures.
Bravo! Annie

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  • tatara Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 206 W: 64 N: 401] (3779)
  • [2009-06-06 11:51]

Very artistic and you have a great new style...
congratulation...
great work
Regards
JozefK

Hello Mujahid,
original and lovely composition with wonderful presentation, excellent sharpness, Best regards Siegfried

Hola amigo.
Precioso el cuadro que presentas aquí.
Perfecta combinación de diversos entramados, el mantel, el bg...
Excelentes tonos.
Me encanta tu galería Mujahid.
Un cordial saludo desde Gran Canaria, JL.

Another masterpiece! Your photo's are excellent! How did you achieve this photo if you don't mind sharing?

TFS

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  • Koala Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 391 W: 32 N: 90] (4023)
  • [2009-06-10 21:52]

:D you have beautiful shots
very nice composition
i love the sepia tone.

I wish you a beautiful day!

Alexandra

Hi,
Beautiful and picturesque scenery :] Nice composition, colours and lighting, well framed.
Georg

Hi Mujahid. You've obtained a perfect playing of light and shadopws and amazing sharpenede texture. Fantastic compo.

Roberto

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  • jone Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor [C: 2283 W: 180 N: 0] (29390)
  • [2009-06-12 1:19]

Hello Mujahid ;)))
Very art photo...all my compliments,
J ;)

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  • ramon Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 281 W: 29 N: 721] (3467)
  • [2009-06-12 10:16]

Hi Mujahid,

Very nice still life, i like the soft lighting here.
Well composed...

TFS
Ramon

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  • mbrito Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1644 W: 118 N: 2834] (11418)
  • [2009-06-17 4:43]

Hi Mujahid
Fine and elegant composition with great sharpness, a fantastic low light, and amazing sepia tones.
The textures and the light gives to the photo a very elegant movement, as soft waves.
Beautiful work.
Cheers, mb

Ciao Mujahid, wonderful compsition with splendid sepia conversion, very well done, ciao Silvio

Hi Mujahid,
Awesome shot, such soothing tones throughout this scene. Nicely composed too.

TFS,
Scott.

Beautiful composition and great PP work, dear Mujahid. Fine presentation. Congratulations and TFS!

Have a great week,
Bruno

Hello Muhajad! Amazing picture, wonderful painting. Excellent still life. Ideal art work. Great effect. Good luck!

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  • sela Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 479 W: 1 N: 473] (3758)
  • [2009-07-05 3:05]

Hi Mujahid, wonderfully arranged and the result is perfect. Very impressive shot.
Regards Rose

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