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ati girls


ati girls
Photo Information
Copyright: Alaz Mal (Alaz) (404)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2009-06-07
Categories: Event, Decisive Moment, Portrait
Camera: D300, NIKON 70-200mm f/2.8-D G-AFS-VR-ED-IF-AF, Hoya HMC Super 77mm U.V.
Exposure: f/16, 1/125 seconds
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2009-06-10 14:18
Viewed: 210
Points: 6
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
2 girls were busy fixing their costumes as the Philippine Independence Day Parade 2009 in Manhattan, NY is about to start.
June 7, 2009
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Wonderful picture. Love the color. You caught a wonderful moment. Great job.

Hello, Alaz -
Great candid portrait, bursting with color. Sharp details of the girls' faces and costumes. Great job managing the sunlight. Very nice work.

superbe image haute en couleurs,

bravo,

cordialement

dd de la Réunion, océan Indien

Hi Alaz,
Here is a good example of better contrast, well at least to my opinion. The colours are still brights and the skin tones are right under that particular light situation. If you would try to brighten up the face...you would look details in lighter area. That what I meant about your previous post.

As for this image. I like it very much. A slight problem with focus...it was done to far back, and the faces are a bit soft.

If you look at the girl on the left, you can notice that the focal point (sharpess area) is pass her eyes, more on her shoulder area.

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