<< Previous Next >>

Korine


Korine
Photo Information
Copyright: Ranny Daroya (ez2get) (133)
Genre: People
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2009-05-28
Categories: Event, Friends/Family, Mood, Portrait
Camera: Canon EOS 40D, Canon EF 50mm f/1.4, 58mm Kenko UV Filter
Exposure: f/5.6, 1/100 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2009-06-21 20:11
Viewed: 337
Points: 6
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Korine at her first modeling trial shot. Still young but I think her beauty pushes her to make it through in modelling world.

and my 3rd time doing model shoot.

C & C helps me improve.

Tia

-Ranny

Only registered TrekLens members may rate photo notes.
Add Critique [Critiquing Guidelines] 
Only registered TrekLens members may write critiques.
Discussions
ThreadThread Starter Messages Updated
To MT900spg: thank you...ez2get 1 06-21 20:49
You must be logged in to start a discussion.

Critiques [Translate]

Great pose and soft lighting. I really like how the model is looking away. My only critique is that I might like less negative space on the left of the frame. TFS

Hi Ranny Daroya
Beautiful

If you want to receive feedback on your photos, may I suggest you also critique other people's photos regularly?

There is no fee for belonging to TrekLens, but none of us should expect to receive c&c and give nothing in return.

An interesting shot, quite striking the way she's looking towards the near frame, although I don't quite understand the composition. You've cropped her butt out of the shot and I don't really know why, when there is so much negative space to the left of the frame.

This seems to me a better shot if you placed her to the left, with negative space on the right - in the direction of her gaze?

Definitely a pretty model.

Rew

Calibration Check
















0123456789ABCDEF