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sunsets
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Copyright: Viktorija Rimenaite (ciore) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 783 W: 3 N: 108] (2309)
Genre: People
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2009-01
Categories: Mood
Camera: Nikon D-50
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2009-06-28 2:17
Viewed: 295
Points: 6
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
eina žmogus
saulėlydy jo
tik šešėlis
ir girgžda
po kojomis smėlis
ir neša kažką svarbaus
neaišku tik:

algą ar maldą


the man
the sunset of his
only a shadow
and strident
sand feet
and brings something important
it is not clear only :

salary, or prayer

S. Jackevičius poetry
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brrrrrrr....
sad atmosphere... but the frame is not okay? or I drunk to much??

Olá Viktorija
Nice cold moment
i liked
regards
Paulo

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  • torr Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 406 W: 50 N: 80] (1735)
  • [2009-07-25 22:40]

Ones more the story in your work overrouls the picture itselve.
Ok verry nice shot.
But the admosfere makes it 1000 times stonger.

Balance picture and reason!!!
kurt
!

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  • chrisJ Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 4267 W: 414 N: 6826] (42710)
  • [2009-10-16 23:44]

Hi Viktorija

Good lead in lines & linear perspective, in this superb winter shot. The person adds scale & context. Tfs!

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