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sense of pride


sense of pride
Photo Information
Copyright: bryan johnstone (luckybry) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 646 W: 32 N: 845] (6309)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2009-06-27
Categories: Humorous, Event, Decisive Moment
Camera: Nikon D40X, 55-200mm Niikkor f/4.0-5.6
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Theme(s): borders ferstivals and common ridings [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2009-06-28 3:59
Viewed: 235
Points: 20
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
couldn,t resit uploading this shot the sense of pride on the youngster face like he is saying im in front .Taken at the Galashiels braws lads gathering as the horses finished the rideout round the towns lands
shot in raw resized and uploaded ty for looking
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Hi bryan

I would just sharpen the fg horse & rider a little more. Reasonably good use of a shallow dof, with excellent framing & perspective. Tfs!

great expression captured on this youngster's face! nice pov and detail-well seen!

I love horse's photography. You can watch them on my page.

Hi Bryan,

It's a no bad photo but could be a smidgen sharper but that's difficult to get right when the subject is still moving. The Galashiels Common Riding looks to have been a success, the colours are very good, great narrow dof well done in a difficult situation.

Regards
Jon

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  • bri Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 310 W: 0 N: 361] (1972)
  • [2009-06-28 10:24]

Hi Bryan, Great shot of this proud youngster, I think you could sharpen it a tad and increase saturation to bring out the colour a bit more, DoF and framing of the subject is great - the poor pony looks knackered! TFS
Bri

TFS Bryan it is a good human interest shot with good colours and details. Bearing in mind your motivation for this shot i have done a workshop. I hope you like
warm regards
David

hello Bryan
this time you have stummped me out! ;-)
great shot
fantastic vertical composition and what a grace in the frame
wonderful depth of filed
a fine eye contact with the rider
great sharpness and well exposed.
thanks for sharing this brilliant shot.

regards
Manuj (you always misspelled my name, hehe hehe)

this photo is great I think this is a nice capture

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  • RSK Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 504 W: 130 N: 948] (6936)
  • [2009-06-30 12:19]

What a proud smile indeed, right place @ the right time.
I like that you have blurred everything except the young rider Brian ,it really makes him the main subject with no conflicts from any other subject,his facial expression is what this image is all about,good capture.Perhaps a tad more detail in his face could have been gotten,but that said,you still have captured a wonderful happy moment for this young lad,if you know him Brian,I'm sure he would be over the moon to get a copy of this image.
Regards
Ron

Yes you can feel the Pride of the young boy riding the horse at the center. very nice capture.

tfs
cris(",)

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