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where to go?
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Copyright: BG BG (Nana-S) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 57 W: 30 N: 14] (574)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2008-11-14
Categories: Mood
Exposure: f/3.5, 1/80 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Theme(s): People [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2009-06-28 5:56
Viewed: 173
Points: 4
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Lost in the universe, thats more frightening than fear,
Lost in the Earth, where I feel as if nothing is near,
Lost as a person, Lost as man,
Needing to find myself, but I dont think I can.




(K.Horwath)

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I liked the composition. I believe, however, the seemingly blown highlights are too much and they occupy a rather critical position in the photograph. Although the ISO is not known, the exposure values look rather high for a scene like this.
I liked the poem, by the way.

I like many of the patterns we can find in the photos of your gallery. This one is remarkable. And the man standing there is an extra point. TFS

Lorena

the burnt area is a little bit too big but it looks nice, the patterns, the silhouette, good shot
jc

i like the idea and composition, but i am still fighting with the crop and/or pov. the different parts are great => the
patterns in the front, the dark silhouetted man and the (a little bit too burnt) mediterranean sea in the back - but
for me there is either too much in the front or in the back. best wishes & take care, thor.

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