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Selfportrait(today me)


Selfportrait(today me)
Photo Information
Copyright: bratislav obradovic (bracasha75) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 799 W: 52 N: 456] (11321)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2009-07-12
Categories: Portrait
Exposure: f/2.8, 1/180 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2009-07-15 1:42
Viewed: 347
Points: 24
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
I,m without inspiration today and send me alone
Twin all beautiful trees and sunsets i have found this ugly guy...haha
All best my TrekLens Friend
Bratislav
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To burak28: Eye testWhiteKnight 2 07-22 19:46
To willie: Heybracasha75 1 07-17 08:43
To Kilted-Arab: Hibracasha75 1 07-15 05:49
To burak28: ????????Kilted-Arab 1 07-15 02:35
To WhiteKnight: Hi Davidbracasha75 4 07-15 02:25
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Hi Bratislav
Wonderful capture and selfpotrait
You look great
Burak

Picture is tilted, composition is poor (cut your legs off), the photo is poor quality and grainy, over exposed BG - do you want me to go on??

David

i want sunsets and lonely trees! *g* haha, nein, man(n) muss auch mal was anderes probieren, und wir sind ja hier um zu
lernen. die idee war schon mal gut, die pose auch, die neigung des photos nach links lässt sich ja korrigieren, aber der weiße
himmel hinter dir ist echt schlimm und überbelichtet, ich hätte ihn schon mal so 1cm oberhalb des kopfes gecropt.
ob beine oder nicht ist eher geschmackssache, so abgeschnitten ist es nicht so schön, dann wirklich an der taille enden
lassen.und was natürlich immer künstlerisch wirkt ist schwarz-weiss. viele grüße aus dem sonnigen köln, thor.

Sorry Bratislav - you have many fine shots, including portrait, in your portfolio but I don't understand why you posted this one.

David has been honest with you, Burak has not.

This is out of focus, badly composed and poorly exposed.

Do you think otherwise? Please, where am I wrong in that?

Salut Bratislav.
Enchanter de faire t’a connaissance différemment que derrière le viseur de l’appareil photo.
Bonne idée.
Urs

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  • AndroK Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor [C: 1465 W: 23 N: 0] (11700)
  • [2009-07-15 4:39]

Zdravo druze...
Trebao si se kontra okrenuti suncu :-)
Ambijent lijep oko tebe, iskoristi ga...
Pozdrav...
Andro

Ciao Braca, nice see you in a lovely selfportrait my friend, best wishes from Spoleto, very well done, ciao Silvio

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  • gnada Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2662 W: 74 N: 4763] (21687)
  • [2009-07-15 10:41]

Zdravo Braco...

Portret je zanimljiv i dopada mi se poza,
ali mozda si mogao malo 'kresnuti' odgore...
Pozdrav,
George

Witaj!
Interesujacy portret,dobra poza zamyslonego czlowieka.
Dobra ostrosc i kolory.
Pozdrawiam
Tadeusz

Sdravo Brati. Are tou tired my friend...?
Just an ugly guy..... Friendly


Roberto

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  • nicou Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1268 W: 0 N: 2483] (20320)
  • [2009-07-16 1:48]

Hello,

Très bel auto-portrait, quel bel homme dans un décor végétatif, superbe.

Bravoe t amitié

Nicou

from a selfportraiter to another.. ;))
great to look at you.. outside the mine! you must be more happy..
dont feel you alone.. you have the entire universe to have a good inspiration!
you are a good subject.. this shot looks so expressive of your inner mood!! you looks so bored! ;)))
it's effective indeed.. thanks
ciao Marco

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  • Alexia Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 189 W: 0 N: 220] (2450)
  • [2009-07-16 17:26]

Ciao..bell'autoritratto
semplice, ma che trasmette
tutto il tuo stato
d'animo del momento
Complimenti
Alessia

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  • tatara Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 206 W: 64 N: 401] (3779)
  • [2009-07-16 18:26]

Pozdrav moj druže..
Vidim došli vukovi na tvoje stranice...
Meni je fotografija zanimljiva,ali to je naravno samo moje mišljenje...

JozefK

The idea is nice but that's all i can say. I don't like it very much ! The bg has a lot of OE. fg is too dark. Maybe next time......

willie

Hello Bratislav! Very interesting self-portrait. Are You very serious man? Good exposure. Good effect. Well done!

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