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Copyright: JL Goh (glynn) (345)
Genre: People
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2009-08-04
Categories: Friends/Family, Portrait
Exposure: f/9.0, 1/60 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2009-08-05 10:30
Viewed: 146
Points: 4
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
so I have succeeded forcing him to take picture with me, haha.

Well, more like a request and he agreed...wheee! I took few of his portrait and our pic.

Filtered black and white the pic, added some touch and added our ´thinking´ text in finnish when the shot was taken.

ehkä minun vaimoni on hullu - maybe my wife is crazy
ehkä minun mies on aina siisti - maybe my husband is always neat (looking at his crumple shirt)


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To rewshearer: heyglynn 1 08-05 14:54
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Did you use tripod and timer for this?

Nice use of light and the dynamic between you two works well.

I think there is potential for an even stronger composition, using the corner-to-corner diagonal. "Rules" of a portrait suggest that if your subject's eyes are on that diagonal line, it works very well so I tried a WS to see if it's true. :)

Rew

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  • nova Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2735 W: 263 N: 864] (8653)
  • [2009-08-05 18:41]

This is a charming pose.Some people would be embarassed or distracted by the folds on the man's sweater but personally I find that it gives some interesting texture to this photograph.I like both your expressions.Good use of light.TFS
Michel

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