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Pink in Paris


Pink in Paris
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Copyright: daisy daisy (daisydaisy) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 627 W: 94 N: 465] (9383)
Genre: Places
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2009-07
Categories: Architecture
Camera: Panasonic Lumix DMC TZ3
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Theme(s): Paris Paris [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2009-08-05 10:53
Viewed: 234
Points: 18
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Architecture from Paris

Partial desaturation
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hi daisy.
i would have prefered the whole image to be in bw. the colour 'cheapens' the shot. imho.

i like the pov just not the colour.
Brian

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  • RSK Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 519 W: 133 N: 973] (7147)
  • [2009-08-05 11:00]

Greetings Daisy,
I like how you have seperated the colours or added them, as I see that the balconies are red & I think IMHO the image would be improved if they were black. Good sharp details on the ironwork on the other buildings. Is each window an apartment, or are all four windows belonging to the same apartment?
TFS

Ron

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  • roges Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 572 W: 0 N: 1085] (5314)
  • [2009-08-05 11:23]

Bonsoir Daisy,

Super catch! Excellente votre idée d'une photo de cette image!
Une belle soirée,
Adrian

Bonsoir Daisy,

Paris is pretty in colours, Paris is pretty in BW and Paris is also pretty in partial desaturation. I like this experiment of yours. I find it interesting and that pink colour really stands out.

Well chosen POV, great sharpness and nice PP work.

Je te souhaite une belle soirée,

Stasa

Bonsoir Daisy,
Aujourdhui nous avons publié experimentations de dessaturation partielle.
Moi aussi j'aime ton expeience.
Amitiés,
Raimundo

Salut Daisy,

Si c'est vraiment la couleur originale du batiment...il faut quand même aimer!

La desaturisation partielle augmente le dégoût, donc, dans ce sens la, la photo est réussie.

Beau travail,

Bàt,

Patrick

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  • jone Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor [C: 2291 W: 180 N: 0] (29488)
  • [2009-08-06 2:22]

Bonjour Daisy ;-)))
Original beautiful part of Paris...TFS
Have a nice day,
J ;)

Hi Daisy
someone says you need help, is it true?
Well here arriving to help you!
I think this shot is good for idea but I would prefer to de-center the red part (red and pink of course)
The effect is good even if I would add more contrast
Hope I helped you! :)
ciao
Lucio

Salut Daisy.
Bien jouer et bonne initiative de repeindre les maison de la capitale.
Bon week-end.
Urs

Hi Daisy,

Superb idea of the partial desaturation for this photo. I like using this technique for some of my compositions. GReat fun!

Your photo is superb - great POV used and great choice for this idea. Well done and TFS.

Martyn

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