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RAMADAN KAREEM


RAMADAN KAREEM
Photo Information
Copyright: mariyah gaspacho (mahryska) Silver Star Critiquer [C: 11 W: 0 N: 49] (54)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2009-08-07
Categories: Portrait
Exposure: f/8, 1/160 seconds
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2009-09-06 9:34
Viewed: 149
Points: 10
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Ramadan Kareem wishes to everyone...

Model: Elena
Makeup & Styling: Anna De Leon
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  • psyce Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 178 W: 11 N: 100] (1717)
  • [2009-09-06 9:43]

very nice portrait... the model looks good and knows what she is doing.... shes relaxed and enjoying herself... I like the composition of the photo too... well done... TFS

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  • Fortuna Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2755 W: 1596 N: 5340] (19413)
  • [2009-09-06 9:48]

Beautiful model and pose.
Good lighting.
I don't like the position and size of the watermark.
TFS Sergio

Hi
Nice photo,mariyah gaspacho . Good lighting,though its slightly more on the knuckle and fingers.Btw, whats the yellow tint extending from the ear to the chin? Is it part of the makeup?. I think its better to adjust the transparency ,and reduce the font size of the watermarking by one or two steps , so that it wont be distracting or become a part of the main subject itself .

TFS
Have a NiceDay :)
-Neuro_Toxin

Hi Mariyah
This is over words....professional shot
the model is by far so beautiful
the light enhances her beauty
the details and sharpness are terrific
I also can say you have here seduction charm and elegance
Beautiful
Excellent work
Have a grate week!
Oana

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  • isa Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 356 W: 57 N: 710] (4145)
  • [2009-09-06 15:45]

Hello Mariyah,
Great potrait, interesting light and definition, beautiful model, perfectly makeup and style.
Congratulations.
Regards.
Isa

Hi Mariyah,
This is an excellent portrait! Your model is very beautiful and she's even relaxed. Her make-up really suites her.
The lighting is perfect and the details and sharpness are great.
Nice job!

TFS!

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