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Marina - 10 mois


Marina - 10 mois
Photo Information
Copyright: Olivier Boit (Yukumizu) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 66 W: 4 N: 32] (623)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2009-07-05
Categories: Decisive Moment, Friends/Family, Portrait
Camera: Pentax K100D, Pentax SMC DA 40mm f/2.8 Limited
Exposure: f/2.8, 1/125 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2009-09-08 7:17
Viewed: 215
Points: 10
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Ma fille après le bain.

Je prends une photos tous les dimanches avant ou après le bain pour suivre son évolution.
Une phote prise très vite, elle bouge tout le temps.
Format RAW.
Peu de retouches, seulement un peu la balance des blancs.

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To guinness_fr: MerciYukumizu 2 09-23 11:58
To dilshan74: MerciYukumizu 1 09-23 07:23
To tioguerra: MerciYukumizu 1 09-10 19:29
To psyce: MerciYukumizu 1 09-10 19:26
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  • psyce Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 180 W: 11 N: 105] (1770)
  • [2009-09-08 7:24]
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I like the composition of the photo... the negative space to the left added to photo... the sharpness of the boys eyes... well done... TFS

Your photo is really good. The shallow DOF of the f/2.8 is perfect for letting through impression of softness and smoothness of baby skin. The sharp focus on the eye closer to the camera allows the viewer to connect to the child personality. I also like that you didn't show clothing and the lighting is great. Overall this is a really good portrait. Sorry, I cannot really find any useful critic. But if I were to be really picky maybe I would suggest trying this without the toy.

incredible bokeh with focus on her eyes..
very well composed!
TFS-ARFA

Bonjour Olivier

Superbe portrait, la faible profondeur de champs me convient tres bien, le focus su l'oeil, et la lumiere superbe. plein de douceur

bravo

Olivier

Very beautiful portrait of this cute youngster. I love the shallow DOF effect utilized here that still retains sharpness of the right eye which makes an excellent focal point and the neutral BG provides good contrast without being distracting. A photographers note would have been helpful but I'm splitting hairs here as it is hard to fault this picture. Well done and thanks for sharing.

regards,

dilshan74

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