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Silence
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Copyright: Marga van Zutven (Margy) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 111 W: 6 N: 227] (2512)
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Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2009-08-19
Camera: Sony Alpha DSLR 350, Hama UV Filter
Exposure: f/22, 1/250 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2009-09-08 15:10
Viewed: 254
Points: 33
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
19 august, my eldest granddaughter became 9 years. She was not at home but stayed for a hollyday on a campingplace in Renesse so I got up early to congratulate her, a two hours drive.
It was worth it and we all had a wonderful day.
I even had time for a little walk along the beach, I don't see the sea so often, I enjoyed it very much!

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Love the minimal feeling to this shot, the strong composition - the subdued colours and even light.
Rew

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  • jackal Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 307 W: 3 N: 217] (2891)
  • [2009-09-08 17:30]

Hi Marga,
a classic shot, I have just been looking at a similar shot on Flickr (hope that's not a dirty word on TL) which was taken in South Africa but the umbrellas were on the LHS - nice simple composition, well done
cheers
Jack

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  • Tezza Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 177 W: 96 N: 269] (2745)
  • [2009-09-08 18:03]

Unlike you, I spend much of my time by the sea and have attempted a similar shot many times (brightly coloured umbrellas against simple seaside background) but none of mine have been as successful as your shot. You have composed this perfectly and captured the feeling of the title beautifully.

hi marga
nice composition of this shot,good contrast between the sea and sand.
regards
jimmy

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  • jone Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor [C: 2280 W: 178 N: 0] (29348)
  • [2009-09-09 0:26]

Hi Marga ;)
Wonderful relax composition...
J ;)

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  • Fons Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1301 W: 2 N: 202] (15646)
  • [2009-09-09 0:45]

de kalmte en de rust straalt er van uit. Zeer mooi !

Hi Marga,

excellent, clear and strong composition. Nice use of empty space. Small issue imo - photo looks a bit dimmed. I made a workshop correctiong it.

Marek

Very nice! I love this kind of minimalist shot. the simple white frame is perfect here too.
Great shot Marga
Trudy

Hi Marga,

lovely mood captured here. well seen and well executed. simple but well done job.

Tfs,
Sanjib.

Hi Margy
great composition of minimal participants.
splendid soft tones nicely patched with some vivid colored spots in good contrast.
a wonderful summer image.
greetings
tsilla

Hello Marga

Enjoy the silence... Pure zen mood.
Perfect minimalist work.
Clever composition as I like.
WOW , Marga... really strong impact.
CoMpLiMeNtS

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  • harpya Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 5754 W: 198 N: 2553] (10026)
  • [2009-09-11 12:38]

Ciao Marga,


Ah, I already know where I can pick one
umbrella for my waterfall, here!
That peace, that peace and beauty together.
Your parasols give a great show in the landscape!
Excellent perspective and amazing area too.
Tasteful

Have a nice weekend,

Sergio

Hi Margy,
What a lovely picture. One can almost hear the silence :)
Beautiful composition, birthday cheerfull colors of the 'parasols' and the quiet shadow underneath, wow
Thanks
Felicia

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  • korbee Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1398 W: 0 N: 1695] (13695)
  • [2009-09-12 11:36]

Een betere zomerafsluiting had je niet kunnen maken Margy,heel strak.

jan

Hallo Margy.
Een schitterende opname. prachtig van kleur en een zeer sterke compositie. Geniet van deze opname er gaat veel ontspanning an uit.
Gr Frans

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  • jawa Gold Star Critiquer [C: 1372 W: 0 N: 1] (12003)
  • [2009-09-18 11:05]

Hallo marga
Zo simpel maar o zo mooi.
Gr Jos

wat een sprekende plaat is dit Marga

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  • Adri Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 534 W: 23 N: 1871] (11356)
  • [2009-11-07 2:26]

Gosh.....dat ik déze gemist heb, Marga!
Dus jij bent zomaar "stiekum" in mijn dorp geweest.....?
Het resultaat mag er zijn hoor; een heel strakke plaat.

Groet uit Renesse,
Adri

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