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Kadee + Kyle


Kadee + Kyle
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Copyright: Philip Gerald (philip) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 237 W: 26 N: 176] (1320)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2009-08-30
Categories: Portrait
Camera: Nikon D700, 70-200mm ED f/2.8 AF-S VR Nikon
Exposure: f/4.5, 1/100 seconds
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2009-09-18 20:02
Viewed: 177
Points: 4
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
We did this session with a 50's theme...it turned out great! This is one of the images that I liked a lot. The original was actually pretty underexposed but I was able to recover it with a little dodging. I've posted the original as a workshop. Hope you enjoy it!

Phil

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what happened to your post precessing?
somehow it lacks in contrast, color balance, sharpness.

I did a small ws with the original post.
You do not have to increase brightness that much,

Take care
saki

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  • chrisJ Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 4247 W: 414 N: 6731] (42349)
  • [2009-09-19 3:26]

Hi Philip

I prefer this version to the workshop, which I find too dark. Especially on the man's forehead & woman's long hair. A sensual shot, with excellent dof, colour & sharpness. Tfs!

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