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Copyright: Ronnie Ragonton (ronrag) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 275 W: 53 N: 178] (1281)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2005-07-07
Categories: Portrait
Camera: Casio Exilim EX-Z40
Exposure: f/3.9, 1/8 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2005-07-10 8:24
Viewed: 591
Points: 9
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
she's Analyn and this is my first attempt at portraiture using Photoshop refinements. not a sharp photo because of the slow shutter speed but i tried some tinkering with the PS. selected the subject as layer 1 and applied USM. selected the background and applied some gaussian blur then merged the images.
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  • Venus Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor [C: 118 W: 29 N: 10] (0)
  • [2005-07-10 8:33]

Hi!

I think u did well here with the pp work,the blurry background make the gilr a bit more sharpen..and the colors support her smile and happy mood.

A.

Hi Ronnie

Good use of a shallow dof, but it could be a bit sharper, despite the excellent pp work. Did you use a tripod? Good color & lighting, with excellent graphism. Well done!

Hi Ron, finally some portrait!
Nice try and good result for first-time experiment. But, you might try some noise removal tool and shoot with tripod or with more light.
Check arround, there are a lot of people that shoot portraits, there is even public list "Portrait Photographers" available, and you can find a lot of tips to improve your work. I know I did :)

Keep on!
Regards

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  • erdna Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 629 W: 68 N: 746] (5421)
  • [2005-07-24 12:45]

Oh yes, Ron you will get the hang of it. She is very charming too. Look at her long neck, just like a model. Next time do it it sharper.

I have not been sending "Thank You Responses" as I have been warned twice already not to do it. It is unfortunate as it is part of being civilized and good etiqutte to say "Thanks" to somebody who gives you a compliment.

Andre'

hi, ronnie... i love her smile... can't keep my hands off... i did a workshop... thank you :)

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