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Autum in Chelo


Autum in Chelo
Photo Information
Copyright: Luis Carreira Garcia (lumica) Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 10 W: 0 N: 13] (161)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2009-10-14
Categories: Nature
Camera: Canon EOS 450D, Canon EF-S 18-200 3.5 - 5.6 IS
Exposure: f/22, 1 seconds
Details: Tripod: Yes
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2009-10-15 7:48
Viewed: 93
Points: 12
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
This is a autum photo from river Chelo, La Coruna Spain
I hope you like it.
Thank you for your critiques.
Regards.
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Hola Luis

Nice long exposure effect of the river with good sharpness and DOF. I like the composition too.

Buenos tardes
DAvid

Nice slow shutter speed shot here with great DOF and sharpness. These slow SP waterfall shots can all sometimes be too cliche and the way to avoid this is to actually shoot the light and not always the scene before you. I know you shot this at 18mm in landscape orientation and achieved a great result but looking at the distant cropped BG of the top left frame, there seems to be some amazing play of golden penetrating light rays on offer. Can you see it? I wonder how this scene would have looked like if you had moved the camera in the portrait orientation and shot the moving water, rocks and golden lit trees as your BG. Just a suggestion only and there is nothing wrong with this shot. I am only trying to show you another perspective.

cheers,

Dilshan

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  • Adri Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 524 W: 23 N: 1853] (11208)
  • [2009-10-15 8:25]

Excellent shot, Luis!
Very well composed with beautiful colors and light.
Wonderful effect of the long shutter.

TFS and greetings from Netherlands,
Adri

hi luis.
the water is captured very well. the composition is also good.
a little more saturation would have brought out the depth of colours from the rocks, moss and leaves.
Brian

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  • roges Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 500 W: 0 N: 920] (4643)
  • [2009-10-15 9:34]

Ola Luis,
Excelente captura. Detalles excelente con algunos colores grandes. Magnífico paisaje.
Una noche hermosa,
Adrian

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  • Jonela Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 377 W: 2 N: 378] (2765)
  • [2009-10-15 14:53]

Hi Luis,

A very good shot the 1 second exposure has captured the water perfectly I like the pov the colours look very natural the details sharp and the dof is very nice well done.

Regards
Jon

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