Evening falls over Luoto

Critiques [Translate]

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• pozaru (19140)
• [2009-10-16 0:40]

Wonderful atmosphere in this excellent compo.
Love the reflected light in the windows


thanks,
v

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• Sharpshooter (6922)
• [2009-10-16 1:12]

Hi Hans,
Quite a subtle difference over the original by looking at it, but there is certainly a noticeable change - Looks a lot more vivid and eye-catching now. Personally I may have cropped a smidgen more off the sky, everything else is great however.

TFS,
Scott.

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• andateaffan (312)
• [2009-10-16 1:15]
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si adesso i colori sono migliori e più caldi dall prima che hai postato
malgrado questo ribadisco che si tratta di una immagine e di un paesaggio non particolarmente interessante
Ho girato la foto di 0,5° a destra e ho tagliato per mettere la casa su di un lato e non al centro.
Ti mando un ws per farti capire meglio.
La definizione del ws non è ottima perchè ho dovuto ridimensionare la foto ma tu certamente capirai
Anda

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• Royaldevon (16566)
• [2009-10-16 2:03]

Hello Hans,

The autumnal trees make a pleasing warm layer, with the focal house and its sun-reflecting windows, adding interest and further colour.
Like Scott, I would have cropped a little from the sky for better composition.

Kind regards,
Bev :-)

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• lilimih33 (18023)
• [2009-10-16 3:35]

Hello Hans!
Both version are beautiful, but this one seems to be better!
Excellent colours and nice autumn atmosphere!
Good sharpness and lovely point of view!
Best regards!
Lili

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• Hitbit (5872)
• [2009-10-16 3:49]

Mooi dat licht en de kleuren in deze plaat echt het najaar gevoel, heel mooi Hans.

Grtz Pim

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• Tanjicka (1758)
• [2009-10-16 4:57]

Hello Hans,

Beautiful composition and great point of view.
The colors are perfectly shown.

Best regards,
Tatjana

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• Ejtaan (11439)
• [2009-10-16 5:31]

Die lucht is echt typisch voor Finland... zo hebben wij hem ook vaak gezien.
De kleuren van het gebouwtje doen het prima in de ondergaande zon en ook de bomen staan er mooi bij zo... een leuke plaat al is de compositie niet zo heel spannend, maar... ik weet uit ervaring, dat dat best moeilijk is in Finland...
Er zijn in het Finse hele mooie plekjes, maar het merendeel van het landschap is behoorlijk saai.........

Groetjes,
Anneke

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• rewshearer (21081)
• [2009-10-16 14:01]

Nice image - the colours are certainly nicely strong here, the image is sharp and crisp.

I can understand why there would be a benefit in repositioning the house a little to the left, and IMO the horizon may be slightly tilted - although with only a centimetre or so of "horizon" to go on, that's a difficult thing to assess!

Terrific work though!
Rew

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• Beger (19976)
• [2009-10-16 20:53]

Hi Hans,
Good your reposted version. The colors are definitively more bright especially on the trees. Superb diffuse light on the sky. You presented a charming place well enhanced by this warm fall view. Bravo and thanks for the note too! Annie

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• janneman (1022)
• [2009-10-17 13:15]

Hans,
IMO heb je dat goed voorelkaar gekregen : dàt was wat ik voor ogen had :-)
Ben blij dat ik je " scherp " hou hihi

Tot ziens

Groetjes
Jan

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• chrisJ (42744)
• [2009-10-18 0:47]

Hi Hans

The 2 red turrets, contrast well, against the pale blue sky. Good sharpness & framing. Maybe I'd boost brightness & contrast in the heavily shaded Autumn foliage, to make it 'pop' more? Good composition & light management. Tfs!

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• RSK (7147)
• [2009-10-26 10:35]

Wow,quite a difference from the original Hans,this one has vibrance.I like the sunrays hitting the windows & the red roof of the home.Beautiful fall scene, strong composition,the placement of the home is perfect. Appreciated your notes too.
Do not agree with Anda's Ws far to blurred in MHO.
TFS
Ron