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Claire


Claire
Photo Information
Copyright: Philip Gerald (philip) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 237 W: 26 N: 176] (1320)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2009-10-17
Categories: Mood, Portrait
Camera: Nikon D700, Nikkor 50mm f/1.4G AF-S
Exposure: f/2, 1/4096 seconds
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2009-11-04 9:56
Viewed: 134
Favorites: 1 [view]
Points: 12
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
This was taken here in downtown Yakima. I used a California Sunbounce for extra lighting.
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  • Great 
  • mukesh Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 691 W: 102 N: 435] (4791)
  • [2009-11-04 10:10]

A tack sharp smile. Great use of Dof. The subdued pastel colours are enchanting. Love the way the shadow of wires are making pattern on Claire's face. Very warm and endearing upload Philip. Thanks for sharing
Mukesh

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  • bri Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 386 W: 0 N: 460] (2461)
  • [2009-11-04 12:52]

Hi Philip,
Great shot of Claire, she is a natural. Great smile and pin sharp focus on her eyes, great light DoF and shadow...pretty much the same view as Mukesh. TFS
Bri

the lighting here is awesome
excelllent work...
nice pov too

Great DOF, composition and lighting here with an amazingly beautiful capture of this girl with a sweet smile....Amazing Portrait full of energy and creativity...well done and TFS!

regards,
Dilshan

  • Great 
  • KBE Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 452 W: 103 N: 597] (2759)
  • [2009-11-04 21:28]

Great narrow DOF at f/2 Philip
I love this lens n would get it as soon as i can :)

anyways, nicely composed and great use of Sun bounce for extra light, it looks fantastic!

Her hand is very near to the lens, which somewhat stops ur eyes in f/g(IMO), very pretty and lively model :)

Have a good day
Cheers
JZM

Hi Philip
very good portrait
nice composition is shown
perfect light and colors.
i made a work shop you can see it and tell me its it good or not.
Riste.

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