Diner #1

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• flyingdutchie (184)
• [2005-07-30 13:33]
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Nice picture, but i'm not sure what to look at: The edge of the clock behind the mirror or the reflection. If it is the reflection, you should have zoomed in a little more, moved a bit to the right, used a shallower DOF to put the neon sign in focus. I wonder how that would have looked like!

Keep it up. You got some nice pics!

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• KellEy (2074)
• [2005-09-01 18:44]

This is unique, with an interesting combination of colour.
Not sure I'd hang it in my home, but neat to look at anyhow.
Take care!

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• Janice (33174)
• [2005-09-12 5:58]
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Hi Peter, this is a very colourful and busy photo, and think I can see what you want show us and it is interesting. Good job!
Looking at your photos shows you are still working out what and how you want to shoot things. It takes us a while to see what we feel best at. And then we change and go on another tack. It is a great learning journey and I hope to see more photos of yours again soon. I have learnt so much from Trek members who have given me honest and helpful critiques, so hang in there. Keep posting and ask questions and look at others' photos and do critique them - that is an excellent way to improve.

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• orbiter (3125)
• [2005-09-29 18:27]

Interesting shot but a little complicated on the eye with those mirror reflections, I do though like the lighting and grain in the shot. Nice

John