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i would call it one of the most memorable moments ...
just beautiful. long exposure has made candle light glow unique...the vintage grainy look is really helping the mood.
bravo...
one minor comment on the barrel distortion...though not visible ....when column on left side is pefectly parralel to the frame..columns on right side is bit inclined...here there is barrel distortion combined with third point perspective ...well..ofcourse minor stretching in photoshop will solve it marvellously...
This is a great pic.
It would help to add the motivation for this pic in the photographers note to make it easier to crit.
The subject is nicely framed and the perspective is good
- chickg
![Silver Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 21 W: 7 N: 56]](http://i1.treklens.com/misc/s-n-g.gif)
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Claudius,
The beauty in this image is the parent and child, giving an explanation or story regarding what there is before them. The composition is wonderful, the use of the tonal quality is as much an important aspect of the image as the image content, itself. While there is a minor perspective change, it is not noticeable, and certainly does not detract from the image. It is a wonderful image, and I like it very much.
Charles
![Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor [C: 1037 W: 47 N: 199]](http://i1.treklens.com/misc/g-s-n.gif)
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