Behind The Wall

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• zto (262)
• [2004-04-08 5:31]

First i though you were totally of with the focus Hantu, which suprised me. Then, a split second later, i though, aha that was exactly what he was going for. I get your idea here, you want us to focus on teh steel construction and wire. I'm not 100% sure it's working all the way though. Thre is a fight between the man and the contruction, based on there placement within the frame i think. Hm...the more i look at it though, the better it works. Mabye my eyes just need to get used to it. It's diftrent and that i like

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• Isabelle (1126)
• [2004-04-10 6:38]

colors are excellent as well as dof.
i would place the guy more on the left (his right side) and have only his shadow framed.
gooa, Hantu.