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• ropetko (0)
• [2005-08-22 3:01]

Hi there Fabian, welcome to TL!
I think you did a good job there, especially good as first post. Include the light source in the photo maybe wasn't that good idea, because putting it away just a little bit and cut it from the photo might result in a better composition and her face wouldn't be that over exposed.
Other than that, this is very good job. Congratulations!

Regards
Robert

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• mukesh (4777)
• [2005-08-22 5:26]

Very well captured intense eyes - stark and hypnotic. Like the choice of sepia. To me the light source in the picture is quite well used, adding to drama with its intriguing shape. Only suggestion would be - why write your name in the creative block of the picture? For that matter why write at all?

Great first posting - looking forward to many more of such kind.

Welcome

Mukesh

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• himajyothi (2709)
• [2005-08-22 7:53]
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HI Fabian... WELCOME TO TL! Wonderful Portrait...! Its an amazing for the first one :) I like the way the light plays on her face... Beautiful model and the features are very evident... especially her eyes which are amazingly Beautiful! Great composition and presentation :) * A note would have been more appreciated * :) Thanks for sharing and see U around :)

Take care...
- HIma.

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• motzart (2105)
• [2005-08-22 17:31]

sie podoba , pomysl taki inny na portret , daje rade brawo :)
pozdrawiam

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• Pamela (1290)
• [2005-08-22 17:38]

Su mirada fuerte, fija, segura, es buenísima. la luz es simplemente perfecta, un muy buen retrato en fondo oscuro. El sepia parecer ser tu preferencia y tu fuerte.
Bienvenido a TL.
Pamela

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• ritual (474)
• [2005-08-23 3:48]

At a first look this picture seemed a "classical" low light portrai but, like all the really nice operas, it becomes better every second you spend in looking it.

Thanks for sharing

Guido