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Rain I
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Copyright: lakshmi prabhala (clix_stuff) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 925 W: 97 N: 402] (2301)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2005-09-04
Categories: Daily Life, Experimental, Abstract
Camera: Olympus Camedia C750UZ, Olympus xD Pic Card
Exposure: f/4.5, 1/1000 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Theme(s): Rain! Rain! [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2005-09-04 7:51
Viewed: 579
Points: 30
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Was stranded at home today coz of heavy rains. Planned to go photo hunting but then I proposed and the Rain Gods disposed. So I do have a few of rain pictures that I'd like to share. Just let me know when it gets a bit too gloomy ;)

This was near the parking lot at my residence.
PP: just a bit of rotation.

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To chiquito: Hey ToMclix_stuff 2 09-05 13:46
To Photograph2u: Hey Yanclix_stuff 1 09-05 12:15
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I like it! Abstract and great colours! Well done.
FRed

  • Good 
  • frank Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 248 W: 18 N: 106] (762)
  • [2005-09-04 8:06]
  • [+]

I like it, too, very interesting, but please use some unsharp mask to make it look sharper!
Frank

Hey that's a great shot Lakshmi! You seem to be really good at picking up marvellous details of daily life. Well done! TFS

Well seen and composed.
It is like a painting and is much more than rain drops in a parking lot ... I love the yellow stain that give light to the shot.
Congrats.
Sylvie

Bonjour Lakshmi,
This is juste like a painting... A very moody and artistic shot with a nice composition, but I think there is no need of an additional frame for this shot.
Regards, David

A beautiful abstract. Love the colours and frame. One great capture Lakshmi.
Mukesh

you are very creative in your work, also the joy comes through in every image, great 'graphic', tfs, (*_*)

  • Good 
  • toni Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 132 W: 0 N: 32] (793)
  • [2005-09-04 17:05]

Original idea and great composition. Personnally I'd like it slightly sharper.
Toni

Swirls and whirls and really nice colors, Lakshmi. I like it!

Hi Laksmi, whatever you say, this pic worth more than 2 points even if you don't like to get points honoring your effort!!!
Very nice and abstract interpretation of raining!! Nice colours and compo! IMO there's no need to be sharpened, the delicate softness of the raindrops fits the mood well! TfS
cheers
ToM

Hi Lakshmi!
This is a nicely composed photo indeed..
I especially like the yellow and black markings..Nagpur is full of them..on the roads, off the roads..any where the eye roams..
:)
Thanks for sharing..
Cheers!
~Ashish

Hello Lakshmi, this is a great idea, all the circles made by the raindrops against the black and yellow bg.

And the workshop you did to make it sharper makes it even better.

Tfs. Have a great day, Yan

I'll be back tomorrow for the points :)

  • Great 
  • M4tej Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 277 W: 28 N: 95] (779)
  • [2005-09-05 9:32]

Hi there!!
I like your photo.
Rain drops are so nice catched.
Congrats.
MAtej

  • Great 
  • linus Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1429 W: 12 N: 687] (9376)
  • [2005-09-05 22:17]

Hi Lakshmi,
Very creative abstract.
Sunil

Wonderful colours and abstraction, Lakshmi... amazing eye!
Sorry I haven't been on TE more seriously recently, I have missed a few of your wonderful pics... but now I can see them.
Take care, take lots of shots,
Sarolta

  • Great 
  • jafsc Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 572 W: 50 N: 93] (4610)
  • [2005-09-06 1:49]

The Rain Gods were well served Lakshmi. A nice raining shot. Logically need a good photographer in the good moment and you were there:)
José A.

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