Headache

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• Tintin (1982)
• [2005-09-05 9:38]
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What a beautiful portrait of your sister, Matej, very creative. I think that the pose really scream "headache". Her mouth is open like she is really in pain, her hair in her face and her hand on her head are great. There is even a halo around her the right side of the picture that is probably due to how you placed the light but it could also represent her pain. Well done!

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• clix_stuff (2303)
• [2005-09-05 9:39]
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This is so cute....I can imagine how much you both have. You caught a very natural expression of hers. Nice lighting and background as well. Good work and keep it up. Have fun both of you but dont bug hanna so much!! lol :)

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• tournesol (12862)
• [2005-09-05 9:48]
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This is a fantastic portrait, Matej! If you asked her to take that pose, she would not do it! The best about your shot is the background light, which is perfect. You are showing A LOT of talent with a camera for a boy of your age, or any age! Excellent work!

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• ropetko (0)
• [2005-09-05 9:54]
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Ej care, ovo ti je geenijaaaaalan portret!!! Fenomenalno, stvarno si me totalno oborio s nogu! Svjetlo, kompozicija, oštrina, njezin izraz, sve. Sjaj iza njezine lijeve ruke je nešto fenomenalnoa! Svaka ti čast, ovo zaslužuje 10 bodova. Inače, sestra ti je stvarno dobar model, zajedno stvarno možete naučiti raditi odlične fotografije.
Pozdrav!
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This is awesome! I am really surprised with this portrait. The light, composition, sharpness, her expression, everything! That glow behind her left hand is something great! Congratulations, this deserves 10 points!
BTW, your sis is a great model, together you can learn each other how to makee great photos.
Regards

Robert

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• Maria74 (5997)
• [2005-09-05 10:10]
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Great work, Matej!!
Your sister is so beautiful! You captured the right moment, really, it's fantastic!
When I saw your title, my heart ached for a second, as I sometimes have quite bad headaches myself...but I felt relieved when I read it wasn't serious!!
bravo!!
Marija

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• goc (0)
• [2005-09-05 10:14]
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odlicno !
jedino mi se cini da je bilo posla na slici, ha ?
mislim na svjetli dio kod lijeve ruke i glave ...
no bilo kako bilo ...fotografija je super

peace,
goran

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• GlenC (787)
• [2005-09-05 10:40]
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Wondeful capture. This is a real great portriat shot. Lots of emotion, well framed, very creative. Almost ghost like in appearance. TFS Matej,

Glen

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• tanbinh (3156)
• [2005-09-05 12:02]
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beautyful photo!
good portrait!
belle composition! bravo!
bye...tanbinh.

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• jpdeloof (4828)
• [2005-09-05 12:22]
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HELLO Matej.
The way of putting itself is pretty and you succeeded in emphasizing your sister. A beautiful clearness a neutral bottom of color pastel which gives character to the photograph.
Beautiful work
jp

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• lucbus (10317)
• [2005-09-05 12:26]
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Very good portrait, the expression is so natural.. The background is excellent and makes beautifule colors. Good work.

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• tropicalrips (0)
• [2005-09-05 12:32]
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i think the photo is kind of cute :)
good idea for a photo

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• chefcop (4638)
• [2005-09-05 12:46]
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You certainly have your parent's photographic genes. Terrific shot with some style. TFS

Peter

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• Carma (4974)
• [2005-09-05 13:21]
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• pfilip (431)
• [2005-09-05 13:42]
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Bok Matej!
Vrlo dobar portret!
Čestitke
Filip

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• branci (262)
• [2005-09-05 13:56]
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Hi Matej,
Fenomenalno!
Pozdrav
Branka

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• AnneFrance (5452)
• [2005-09-05 13:59]

Waouw, matej,
this is really a nice picture, well captured, very very well done!

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• SylFondacci (14127)
• [2005-09-05 14:24]
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Undoubtedly a nice portrait of your sister who, as I already know, is a great model ...
I like the complicity between her and you on this work !
We can see her make-up, especially the lipstick :)
Nice shot, Matej !
Sylvie

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• KiwiRob (550)
• [2005-09-05 15:07]

Hi Matej
Love this shot, your sister makes a fantastic model, keep it up.
Cheers
Rob

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• Pamela (1290)
• [2005-09-05 15:24]
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I guess in this shot Hanna is frightened about what will your Mom say about her make-up....

I like the light in this, so natural. Her mouth with dark make-up.
Well done, nice shot.
Pamela

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• balkermay (2995)
• [2005-09-05 16:13]

Hello Matej... I like the way you use the light... The pose of your model very well-balanced... I think that you can change the mood of this photo by using photoshop or other image manupulation programs... However, it is the best... Congratulations...

Can

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• ruudblok (22361)
• [2005-09-06 9:52]
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Matej,
What can I say when you are 12 years and make this kind of photo’s. If I look at your photos you are a grown up. I was 8 when I started and I am 56 now. I think we are on the same level. What will happen if you are 18 or 21. I know the answer WORLD FAMOUS!!!

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• chrisJ (42596)
• [2005-09-07 3:59]

Hi Matej

The warm colors seem to make the headache appear stronger. Good depth of field (dof). Well done!

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• alagoa (0)
• [2005-09-07 13:57]
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This is also a very strong portrait, because you wanted to show us more than just a photo of your sister... She had an headache and when looking at the photo we feel it too, so this means by itself that the photo is powerful.
Then I think you did a good job with the lighting, because the colours are very beautiful and natural and seem to create a wonderful harmony in the composition.
The little of what we can see from her face only makes us belive even more that she is with an headache and the touch of the lipstick looks great because it's the strogest colour in all the photo and imediately draws our attention.
Very good work Matej!!
I'll be looking forward for your next photos.

Ana

PS: And thank you so much for the visit at my "new house" you are always very welcome there and I hope you return. Bye!!!

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• stecotdon (4883)
• [2005-09-08 15:16]

Hi Matej,
Sucha creative portrait of your sister. It was a great idea to ask her to pose for you. And you did a great job. I like a lot the expresion on her face as if she really had a strong headache. And I also like a lot her lips. Nice colour ;))
Great Job you!!
Just keep shooting :))

Take care, Stef

:)))) here another BIG smile for you!!!

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• Saiz (0)
• [2005-09-08 15:29]

Very good picture M4tej …
But, your sister becomes crazy in this family of photographes …
She needs some holidays …
°-)
Antonio

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• starkey666 (2748)
• [2005-09-08 22:47]

Great work and background, love the expression on her face.

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• cloverstar (0)
• [2005-09-09 10:01]
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Well done to the both of you. I like your spirit in this shot.

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• edie (0)
• [2005-09-17 4:59]
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The colour are fantastic Matej,you are very good to use light and capture nice attitude of her.
Bravo
Edie
Ps sorry I'm out of points now,I'll be back soon with a smile for you

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• nova (8653)
• [2005-09-18 13:38]
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Hello Matej! What a talented young photographer you are! I am almost jealous! Your photo of your sister is superb! And you know,she is a very good model! I wish to congratulate both of you for your wonderful work! Bravo! Michel

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• Dingo (11948)
• [2005-09-21 17:12]
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Well well well, what have I been missing ? Excellent work Matej, and a nice model too ;o). I think your sister overdid the lipstick a bit, but the hair is a nice camouflage. Beautiful lighting and a very nice, undisturbing backdrop. Very well done! TFS.

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• bolletje (24)
• [2005-09-29 15:00]
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He Matej,
I like your work! Are you giving your sister such a hard time? ;-)
Cheers,
Paul

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• Quark (66)
• [2005-10-29 14:04]

With this picture I now know your whole family, even your sister now, that's funny:-))
This portrait, just fantastic, a mood, great ! !

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• Janone (0)
• [2006-05-30 14:53]

Superb.! Excellent "work'.! 10 points, Matej.
Jan

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• yer6 (1366)
• [2006-05-31 17:27]
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wow! all the words that can be said have been said anyway. the only thing remained on my part is to clap my hands..

i can't belive you are 12 years old.. bravo, bravo matej..