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It's a long way down


It's a long way down
Photo Information
Copyright: Stephen Loiterton (Conspicor) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 274 W: 0 N: 88] (751)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2005-09-10
Categories: Decisive Moment
Camera: Canon Digital Ixus 400
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2005-09-10 8:51
Viewed: 1227
Points: 4
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On the edge of a slippery-dip it's a long way down - or at least it was when I was a small kid. This slide is in a park over the road from where I grew up and I remember it to be a lot higher than it felt today. If it wasn't for this scavenger hunt I wouldn't have revisited this park for who now how long. It's changed a lot, but in other ways it's the same as I remember from my childhood.
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To Peeotr: Thanks for critiqueConspicor 2 09-23 05:03
To Peeotr: what value does it needgnangarra 3 09-23 04:58
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  • bult Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 229 W: 24 N: 86] (1037)
  • [2005-09-10 8:59]

nice pov, although i would've cropped out the bush in the top...

Stephen, I'm sorry but I don't find any photographical value in this photo. What could be interesting - the water drops, but they are showed not in an attractive way. Maybe with a child the photo would look better. Or maybe a strong postprocessing would make it interesting.

I dont know it still looks a long way down well done. I think a crop to remove the trees. I like the water on the slide it reminds of those days when you weren't supposed to but still did it any way then spent ages trying to get dry before mum found out or just you'd just make sure you where soaked before returning home.
Thank you for the trip down memory lane well done
Gideon

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