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~The busy bee~


~The busy bee~
Photo Information
Copyright: Monika Holm (monks) Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 48 W: 0 N: 21] (206)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2005-09-11
Categories: Nature
Camera: Kodak EasyShare LS743
Exposure: f/4.9, 1/500 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2005-09-12 4:29
Viewed: 855
Points: 16
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Hi
I was taking photos of different flowers and i saw a busy bee and started to take photos of it. Some of my photos were blurry, but i did get some good ones. I took this one from my grandmothers frontyard. I love taking photos when i'm at her place.

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Hi Monika ... A very good shot... Ur Grandmama has a very good and beautiful garden I suppose.... I love the brown of the bee against the white... :) Hmmm.. Good composition and a good shot when the bee is really BUSy... :) Hmmm... Abt. the border, I would have preferred thick green... See U around... :)( Thanks for sharing :)

Take care...
- Hima.

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  • NINIX Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 297 W: 128 N: 510] (6612)
  • [2005-09-12 12:12]

Hi M and J,

Great picture!
Maybe the frame a bit overdone but the rest is OK.

Thanks,

Hendrik

hi M&J,
he really seems busy,a good cature.and u did a nice framing work.the color arrangements in the pic is strong,I liked it.
regards

Hello M & J,
Really nice image you produced here! The compositon is nice, but I agree with Hendrik that the frame is a bit overdone. Maybe a black or a darker thiner border would have worked better, but the photo itself is lovely to look at.

Well Done:))

Shelly.

Hi Monika, you have a good photo here. The flower and bee are super. You are getting better and better. Practice is the best thing to do, and having people critique your photos is good too. I don't mind the frame here, it goes well with the yellow of the flower. Well done...

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  • chrisJ Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 4270 W: 414 N: 6846] (42784)
  • [2005-11-16 4:37]

Hi Monika and Josh

Excellent sharpness, & good use of a shallow dof. The bee is a superb addition. Well done!

Hi

Me again - This is a good shot. I like you frame again (personal taste) i would like to know how you created your frame. (nice effect)

Cheers
Brendon

Hi Monica/Josh,
Beautiful shot. I love pictures of bees on flowers, and that flower is perfect. I love the frame.TFS
Mandie

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